Question

2．你是李華，為解決你所在的學(xué)校公益社團(tuán)（public welfare society）的資金短缺問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)給全校學(xué)生寫(xiě)一封募捐信，募集5000元善款．信中必須包括：
1．向全校的捐款號(hào)召．
2．你發(fā)起這一活動(dòng)的理由．
3．你準(zhǔn)備怎樣使用善款的計(jì)劃．
（文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名，學(xué)校等任何真實(shí)信息）

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給提示寫(xiě)一封募捐信．為學(xué)校公益社團(tuán)募集5000元善款．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．向全校的捐款號(hào)召． 2．你發(fā)起這一活動(dòng)的理由． 3．你準(zhǔn)備怎樣使用善款的計(jì)劃．屬提綱作文．在寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主．重要短語(yǔ)：in total （總計(jì)，總共），be faced with （面臨），be short of （缺乏），lead to （導(dǎo)致），be in need （需要），appeal to（呼吁），have no access to（沒(méi)有權(quán)利接近，獲得…），due to（由于），cope with（處理），have the faith that（相信），spare no efforts（不遺余力），in advance（提前）．

解答 Dear students，
 I'm writing to you for your donation to our public welfare society--5，000 yuan in total．Faced with great difficulties currently，we are short of financial funds which directly lead to the inactiveness of the society．【高分句型】（發(fā)起這一活動(dòng)的理由） Without the money，we can do nothing but imagine in our mind the help to those who are in need．Without the money，we can't be the one to give a helpful hand to those who are in need．So I'm here to appeal to all of you to get us out of the financial embarrassment．（向全校的捐款號(hào)召）
      The money we raise here will mostly go to the remote mountainous areas to fund 3 children who have no access to school due to poverty．【高分句型】We'll pay all the fees for the 3 children and get them all the study necessities such as the text books and stationery．In addition，we will spare some cash to the 3 children's family to help them cope with some financial barriers．（使用善款的計(jì)劃）
     We have the faith that we should spare no efforts to help the disadvantaged．Only with your help can we perform our plan．【高分句型】Thanks in advance and we are looking forward to your help．（總結(jié)深化）
 Yours，
 Li Hua

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