Question

11．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．
作文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（　　），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
   2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
I'd like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well．
    First，it was important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practising with your fellow students．Then，it also help to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible．It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!
    Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easy．You can also make more Chinese friends，they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．Try to speak Chinese as many as possible．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介紹如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)提的建議．首先，參加一個(gè)漢語(yǔ)課程，向老師和同伴學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)；也可以看電視和讀書，報(bào)紙和雜志以擴(kuò)大漢語(yǔ)詞匯；學(xué)唱漢語(yǔ)歌曲和結(jié)交中國(guó)朋友等．

解答 I'd like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well．
    First，it was important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practising with your fellow students．Then，it also help to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible．It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!
    Besides，it is a good idea∧learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easy．You can also make more Chinese friends，they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．Try to speak Chinese as many as possible．
詳解：
1．a(chǎn)dvices改為advice 考查名詞．a(chǎn)dvice是不可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式．
2．was改為is 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．本文是對(duì)如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)提的建議，講述的是一般事實(shí)，應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．
3．practising改為practise 考查詞語(yǔ)用法．practise與前面的learn一起是be able to后的并列謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，都用動(dòng)詞原形．
4．help改為helps 考查主謂一致．it做主語(yǔ)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用單數(shù)形式helps．
5．去掉the 考查冠詞．in Chinese意為"用漢語(yǔ)"，是固定短語(yǔ)，Chinese前不用冠詞．
6．to改為with 考查介詞．familiar 和介詞with連用，意為"某人熟悉…"，由句意可知，你將會(huì)熟悉漢字．用介詞with．familiar和介詞to連用，意為"某物為某人所熟悉"．
7．加to 考查動(dòng)詞不定式．it是形式主語(yǔ)，to learn and sing Chinese songs是真正的主語(yǔ)．
8．easy改為easily 考查副詞．learn和remember是動(dòng)詞，要用副詞easily修飾．
9．they改為who或they前加and 考查定語(yǔ)從句．前后兩個(gè)分句沒(méi)有連詞連接，英語(yǔ)中不可以．they前加and，讓兩個(gè)句子變成并列句；they改為who，就變成friends的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．
10．many改為much 考查副詞．修飾動(dòng)詞speak用副詞much．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說(shuō)明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺(jué)是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．