Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是李華，你的同學王林最近沾染上了吸煙的毛病，請你給他寫封信，勸他戒除掉這一壞習慣，信的內(nèi)容包括：

1. 吸煙的危害；

2. 戒煙的方法；

3. 祝福。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭、結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Wang Lin,

I’ve heard that you’ve got into the habit of smoking, which I think does great harm to your health. _________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Lin，

I’ve heard that you’ve got into the habit of smoking, which I think does great harm to your health. You may not know that smoking can do terrible damage to your heart and lungs or that it is more difficult for smoking couples to become pregnant. What’s worse, smoking can affect the health of non-smokers. Even your classmates wouldn’t like to make friends with you.

Here’s some advice on how to quit smoking. First, be determined. Every time you want to smoke a cigarette, do something else. In fact, do anything to keep your mind and especially yours hands busy. Second, keep trying. Don’t be disappointed if you have to try several times before you stop smoking. If you weaken and have a cigarette, don’t feel ashamed. Just try again. You will succeed eventually.

I do hope you will live happily and healthily.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查半開放性作文。本文屬于半開放性作文，題中只給出了要點大綱，具體的要點需要考生自己添加。要求以李華的口吻給王林寫一封信，勸他戒除掉這一壞習慣。使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時。文章要點：1.吸煙的危害：危害個人身體健康；對心臟和肺部有很大影響，讓人難以懷孕，同時對于不抽煙的人也有影響。2.戒煙的方法：要有決心：想抽煙時，做其他事情，讓自己忙碌；如果遇見困難不要放棄，繼續(xù)努力。3.表示祝福。建議文章按照要點分成三段，重點放在文章前兩部分。同時要注意書信的格式，在使用合適的過渡句和過渡詞。