Question

Dear Jenny,

I’m so worried when I see that you’re not a little tired and nervous about the coming College Entrance Examination; Here is some advices to help you prepare the coming exam.

Have enough sleep, whatever much work you have to do，or you’ll feel sleepy on an

occasion in class. A balanced diet will certainly help a lot. Having more fresh fruit and

vegetables every day are good for you. Which you know, a proper method of learning will

enable you to learn more and faster. To get better results, that is wise to be attentive and make

every effort to gain knowledge. And you were supposed to review your notes taking down after

class every day. Always remember to stay happily and optimistic so that you can be energetic

while doing the revision. I hope you’ll no longer feel tired and nervous.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 advices→advice

 prepare后加for

 whatever→however

 刪去an

 are→is

 which→as

 that →it

 were→are

 taking→taken

 happily→happy

【解析】

試題分析：本文寫的是因為Jenny在大學(xué)入學(xué)考試前非常緊張，作者給出的幾條建議。

 因為advice 建議是不可數(shù)名詞，所以沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以去掉s.

 固定短語prepare for 為。。。。。。做準(zhǔn)備，所以加for.

 固定用法：however +many + 復(fù)數(shù)名詞/however + much  + 不可數(shù)名詞+ 主語 + 謂語，無論多少…… ,所以把whatever 改成however.

 固定短語:on occasion 有時候，所以去掉an.

 因為句子主語Having more fresh fruit and vegetables是動名詞做主語謂語動詞用單數(shù)，所以are改成is。

 詞句是一個非限制性定語從句，which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句不能位于句首，所以改成as.

 本句真正主語是to be attentive and make every effort to gain knowledge，應(yīng)該由it做形式主語代替真正主語不定式短語，所以that改成it。

 此處是時態(tài)錯誤，整個短文都是現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，本句也不表過去情況，所以were改成are。

 非謂語錯誤。notes 和take 之間是被動關(guān)系做筆記倒過來筆記被做，所以改成taken,

 副詞錯誤。此句中stay 是系動詞后面應(yīng)該跟形容詞構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)即保持快樂和樂觀，所以happily 改成happy.

考點：考查短文改錯。