Question

【題目】下面圖片描繪了中國(guó)成語“鑿壁借光”的故事，請(qǐng)按要求寫一篇詞數(shù)為100字左右的短文。

內(nèi)容要求：

1. 描述畫面情景。

2. 分析故事中的寓意。

參考詞匯 寓意 moral n.

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Answer 1

【答案】In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it. A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldn’t afford even a candle, so he ‘steal’ light from his neighbor’s house to read at night. The moral of the story is: we should spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

【解析】

這是一篇看圖寫作。要求根據(jù)圖片描繪中國(guó)成語“鑿壁借光”的故事。

第一步：審題

體裁：看圖寫作

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)圖片，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 描述畫面情景。

2. 分析故事中的寓意。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

a pile of books, in a shabby clothes, come in through a hole, be absorbed in, well-known story, can’t afford the school fee, spare no effort., acquire knowledge,

第三步：連詞成句

A boy in a shabby clothes is reading with a pile of books.

A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall.

He was absorbed in his reading.

It is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.

The boy couldn’t afford even a candle,

We should spare no effort to acquire knowledge.

We should never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇

用現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語：We can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.

使用并列連詞連接句子：A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

使用并列句，同時(shí)用讓步狀語從句：We should spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改