Question

15．最近，你校英文報(bào)在舉辦主題為"Exercise an hour every day，healthy life for a lifetime．"的征文活動(dòng)．假定你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文．
1．你對(duì)征文主題的理解；
2．你喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目及活動(dòng)情況；
3．該運(yùn)動(dòng)給你生活和學(xué)習(xí)帶來(lái)的益處．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Nowadays，having sports is becoming more and more popular．
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Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文．就校英文報(bào)在舉辦主題為"Exercise an hour every day，healthy life for a lifetime．"的征文活動(dòng)闡述自己的理解．
寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．你對(duì)征文主題的理解；2．你喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目及活動(dòng)情況3．該運(yùn)動(dòng)給你生活和學(xué)習(xí)帶來(lái)的益處．
重要短語(yǔ)：become more and more popular （變得越來(lái)越流行，受歡迎），keep on doing（一直做…），take exercises（鍛煉），keep fit（保持健康），live a happy life（過(guò)著開(kāi)心的生活），build up（增強(qiáng)），exhausting study（疲勞的學(xué)習(xí)），refresh oneself （提神，清醒頭腦），the spirit of teamwork（團(tuán)隊(duì)精神），enrich one's life（豐富某人的生活），enjoy a healthy life（享受健康的生活）．
【高分句型一】
1．Nowadays，having sports is becoming more and more popular．
此處是動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)"having sports"作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)．
【高分句型二】
2．①As we know，a person②who keeps on taking exercises regularly will keep fit and live a happy life．
①此處為"as"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主句為"a person who keeps on taking exercises regularly will keep fit and live a happy life"．
②此處為"who"引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為"a person"，"who"在定語(yǔ)從句中作主語(yǔ)．
【高分句型三】
3．After school I usually spend half an hour on it，which not only builds up my body but also makes me refreshed．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，"which"在從句中作主語(yǔ)，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．

解答 Nowadays，having sports is becoming more and more popular．【高分句型一】As we know，a person who keeps on taking exercises regularly will keep fit and live a happy life．【高分句型二】（你對(duì)征文主題的理解）
     My favorite sport is playing basketball．After school I usually spend half an hour on it，which not only builds up my body but also makes me refreshed．【高分句型三】（你喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目及活動(dòng)情況）Playing basketball helps me relax after a period of exhausting study and improves my study efficiency．Besides，through the game，I have learned the spirit of teamwork．It is also a good way for me to make new friends．In short，playing basketball enriches my life and makes me more confident．（該運(yùn)動(dòng)給你生活和學(xué)習(xí)帶來(lái)的益處）
     Come on!Let's do sports together and enjoy a healthy life!

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