Question

10．閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文．
Micro Blog has become another classroom for Zhai Langwei，a 21-year-old student majoring in English at Guangdong University of Foreign Studies，and me teachers are celebrities （名人） in academia （學術(shù)界）．
Zhai discussed with Lu Gusun the possible English translation of"literary young women"in Chinese．Lu is me chief editor of the English-Chinese Dictionary，a popular dictionary printed by the Shanghai Translation Publishing House．
Zhai is interested in zoology （動物學） as well．He filled in a quiz from a zoologist of the Science Squirrels Club．He got full marks and me expert's attention．"The feedback （回復） from great scholars has encouraged me to follow my interests，"said Zhai．
Zhai is one of hundreds of millions of Micro Blog users in China．According to China Internet Network Information Center，by the end of June 2010，72.3percent of Micro Blog users were college students
The information on Micro Blogs is short and sweet，and it can be spread by being forwarded by one user after another．This may be partly the reason why，with the help of Micro Blogs，students areable to  interact with celebrities
More and more students have started keeping in touch with celebrities for interaction on Micro Blogs．
寫作內(nèi)容
作為時下最流行的網(wǎng)絡(luò)社交工具，微博越來越受到學生們的青睞．學校最近組織了一次關(guān)于微博流行的討論．請你準備寫一份發(fā)言稿，題目是‘‘The Advantages and Disadvantages ofMicro Blogs"，內(nèi)容要點包括：
1．以約30個詞概括這篇短文；
2．然后以約120個詞談談你對微博的看法，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）微博對于學生與名人之間互動的重要性；
（2）舉一兩個例子去論證"微博的利與弊"：
（3）你的看法．
寫作要求
1．在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱．
評分標準
概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個人觀點．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱用第一和第三人稱． 重要短語：get face-to-face interaction with（面對面交流），be of vital importance （重要），communicate with（與…交流），encourage them to （鼓勵某人做某事），pursue their dreams （追逐夢想），with the help of（在…幫助之下），be admitted to（被錄�。�，gain college admission（獲得進入的權(quán)利），by means of（通過），on account of （由于），share sth with sb（與某人分享某物），．
【高分句型一】
1．Nowadays Micro Blog is becoming more and more popular among students，on which they can get face-to-face interaction with celebrities in academia and broaden their horizons．
此處是由"介詞+關(guān)系代詞"引導的非限制性定語從句，主句為"Nowadays Micro Blog is becoming more and more popular among students"．
【高分句型二】
1．She was a senior high school student in Kaifeng，Henan who attended the National College Entrance Examination and got good grades，only to find that she was not admitted．
此處是關(guān)系代詞"who"引導的定語從句，先行詞為"a senior high school student"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在定語從句中作主語．
【高分句型三】
2．On the other hand，there is no doubt that some drawbacks of Micro Blogs exist．
此處是由連接詞詞"that"引導的同位語從句，"that"引導的從句進一步解釋說明名詞"doubt"的具體內(nèi)容．
【高分句型四】
3．Micro Blogs which bring us numerous benefits in the virtual world can be an excellent platform for students to share viewpoints with each other．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導的定語從句，先行詞為"Micro Blogs"，同時也是句子的主語，句子的謂語為"can be"，表語為"an excellent platform for students to share viewpoints with each other"．

解答 Nowadays Micro Blog is becoming more and more popular among students，on which they can get face-to-face interaction with celebrities in academia and broaden their horizons．【高分句型一】（概括）
      Thereby obviously，it is of vital importance for students to use Micro Blogs to communicate with authorities and big names，and the feedback from the celebrities can encourage them to pursue their dreams．It is also clear to see that some events are able to be resolved with the help of Micro Blogs．（微博對于學生與名人之間互動的重要性）
       Take Li Mengmeng event as an illustration．She was a senior high school student in Kaifeng，Henan who attended the National College Entrance Examination and got good grades，only to find that she was not admitted．【高分句型二】Fortunately，she gained college admission within 24 hours by means of the support from Micro Blogs．On the other hand，there is no doubt that some drawbacks of Micro Blogs exist．【高分句型三】On account of Micro Blogs，an enormous amount of shameful news like family scandal will be enlarged．（舉例論證"微博的利與弊）
      I assert that the positive aspects of Micro Blogs far outweigh the negative ones．Regulated properly，Micro Blogs which bring us numerous benefits in the virtual world can be an excellent platform for students to share viewpoints with each other．【高分句型四】（個人觀點）

點評 讀寫任務型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達內(nèi)容，其中準確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．