Question

文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

  增加： 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)， 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

  刪除： 把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

  修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限1詞；

       2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Zhang Xiaowen, who is sixteen, a middle school student in     Northern China. She is one of the best student in her class and    she was won an award for young scientists last year. When sitting in the classroom she looks just like all her classmates and after class her life is obvious different. She was born without the    ability to use her legs and she has no feeling below the waist. She had to use a wheelchair to get around and it often takes her a little long to do everyday things, such as getting out of bed, getting dressing and going to the school. So far she has created many programmes and one of which received an award at her province’s science fair.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 a middle school student 前加is

  student—students

 去掉was

 and—but

 obvious—obviously

 dressing - dressed 

 had—has

 long—longer

 去掉 the

 which 改 them

【解析】

試題分析：

 who is sixteen是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主句是Zhang Xiaowen a middle school student in    Northern China.可看出缺謂語(yǔ)，所以a middle school student 前加is 。

 在She is one of the best student in her class句中 one of + 名詞復(fù)數(shù)，表示“……中之一”所以student改為students 。

 she was won an award for young scientists last year這句中主語(yǔ)She和謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞win是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以去掉was。

 When sitting in the classroom she looks just like all her classmates and after class her life is obvious different.表示轉(zhuǎn)折，所以and改為but。

 after class her life is obvious different.副詞修飾形容詞，所以obvious改為obviously。

 在“get + 過(guò)去分詞”結(jié)構(gòu)中， get屬于連系動(dòng)詞，與已完全形容詞化了的過(guò)去分詞一起構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)，所以dressing 改為 dressed，意為打扮好的。

 She had to use a wheelchair to get around and it often takes her a little long to do everyday things, and之后用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以前面的句子也應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，had改為has。

 it often takes her a little long to do everyday things,這里實(shí)際上是省略了的比較結(jié)構(gòu)所以long改為longer。

 going to the school. go to school上學(xué)，不需要用冠詞，所以去掉 the 。

 and one of which received an award at her province’s science fair. and連接的是并列句，所以which 改為 them。

考點(diǎn)：考查學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯語(yǔ)法的掌握情況

點(diǎn)評(píng)：答題中注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時(shí)態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用。一般的這類題型不會(huì)出現(xiàn)太復(fù)雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察的就是我們的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)。平時(shí)應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)。修改前先細(xì)讀短文，標(biāo)出出錯(cuò)的位置，改完以后還得細(xì)讀短文，看看改過(guò)后的短文是否語(yǔ)意通順，符合邏輯。