Question

【題目】假如你是高中學生李華，最近發(fā)現一些同學經常到學校附近的網吧(Internet bar)。幾天前，你也去了一次，發(fā)現了許多不良現象。請根據下面的提示寫一封信給某報社編輯，發(fā)表看法，提建議。

1許多同學在網吧玩不健康的游戲，看電影，聊天(chat)。

2 網吧應是獲取有用信息的地方。

3學校應采取措施阻止學生去網吧。

4學生充分利用因特網(Internet)來學習。

要求詞數：100左右。

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Dear Editor,

I am a senior high school student. I am writing this letter to tell you something. Recently I found that

Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I am a senior high school student. I am writing this letter to tell you something. Recently I found that some students often go to the Internet bar nearby, spending most of their spare time on the computer games. What's more, some even go there during the school hours. One weekend, a few days ago, led by a classmate, I went to the bar. Entering the bar, I was shocked. What a terrible place! The bar was full of smoke, with beer bottles here and there. Cigarette in hand, tens of students in school uniforms sat in front of the computers, letting out horrible noise while playing games. I stayed inside for several minutes, then I left. I really could not stand it.

The phenomenon has last for a long time, nobody stops it. It's rule that no bar can exist near a school. Dear editor, I think our government should ban the bar immediately. What's your opinion?

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文。提綱作文在寫作時需要注意以下幾個方面：首先需要審題。即：審要求、審文體、審人稱、審時態(tài)。其次，考生要能夠抓中心，列要點，列出寫作提綱。 寫作文時，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點。然后在體裁明確、中心突出、要點清晰的前提下，考生應該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語、句型，將要點逐條表達出來。最后根據要點選詞組句，然后按照篇章結構連句成篇。

【亮點說明】本文要點齊全、結構完整。文中使用了大量的短語，如spend… on、What's more、be full of、let out等。還使用了一些復合句，如：It's rule that no bar can exist near a school.以及非謂語動詞的使用，如：One weekend, a few days ago, led by a classmate, I went to the bar. Entering the bar,。