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書面表達(dá)（滿分30分）

5月1日。高二（3）班的學(xué)生志愿者Li Yue和Zhang Hua去陽光敬老院（Sunshine

Nursing Home)開展志愿者活動（送水果、打掃、聊天等）。假如你是校英語報(bào)的記者，請按下列要點(diǎn)用英語寫一則100~120個(gè)詞的新聞報(bào)道。

1.  時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、活動；

2.  老人們的反應(yīng)；

3.  簡短評論。

4.  注意：報(bào)道的標(biāo)題和記者姓名已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

 

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                         

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                         

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                         

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                         By Chen Jie, School Newspaper

 

Answer 1

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參考范文：

Student Volumteers Broutht Sunshine to the Elderly

On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went o Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.

When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.

Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.

By Chen Jie, School Nwespaper

 

【解析】本題題材貼近學(xué)生生活，是學(xué)生們在社會實(shí)踐活動中經(jīng)常參加的活動；體裁命制穩(wěn)健，是中學(xué)教學(xué)中最為常見的半開放提綱式作文。給出要點(diǎn)學(xué)生有話可說。寫出簡評讓學(xué)生張揚(yáng)個(gè)性，符合探究理念，但表達(dá)要有重點(diǎn)，注意把前面整個(gè)的活動過程交代清楚，這是寫作的重要內(nèi)容；老人們的反應(yīng)和簡評可以少寫。

要寫好這篇半開放性作文首先要認(rèn)真審題，看清要求，分清寫作的主次，講清本次活動的安排�？梢韵葘⒒顒拥臅r(shí)間，地點(diǎn)、活動的內(nèi)容，以及老人們的反應(yīng)表達(dá)出來；然后再發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，這樣邏輯清晰表達(dá)合理，重點(diǎn)突出。