【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序,寫一篇英文周記,記述你與同學(xué)參與紅十字急救培訓(xùn)活動(dòng)的全過程。

注意:詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞:救護(hù)員證first aider certificate

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【答案】Last week, I took part in the Red Cross first aid training.

At the beginning, we assembled in the school hall to listen to the importance and basic steps of first aid. After realizing how important first aid is, we couldn’t wait to learn more. After a short grouping, we were led to a classroom where a trainer demonstrated the detailed procedure. We watched closely as he showed every move. Then came the test for first aid. Although I was nervous, I managed to carry out all the moves taught.

To my excitement, I was issued a first aider certificate. I held the certificate with pride and thought that I could help more people in need with the knowledge of first aid.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫作文。要求學(xué)生寫一篇英文周記,記述你與同學(xué)參與“紅十字急救培訓(xùn)”活動(dòng)的全過程。

第一步:審題

體裁:記敘文。

時(shí)態(tài):根據(jù)提示,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu):總分法。

要求:

1.記述你與同學(xué)參與紅十字急救培訓(xùn)活動(dòng)的全過程

2.詞數(shù)不少于60。

第二步:列提綱(重點(diǎn)短語)

took part in;how important first aid is;demonstrated the detailed proceduremanaged to carry out all the moves taught.

第三步:連詞成句

1.Last week, I took part in the Red Cross first aid training.

2.After realizing how important first aid is, we couldn’t wait to learn more.

3.After a short grouping, we were led to a classroom where a trainer demonstrated the detailed procedure.

4.Although I was nervous, I managed to carry out all the moves taught.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞(組)進(jìn)行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步:連句成篇

1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序:活動(dòng)的時(shí)間;活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容;活動(dòng)的地點(diǎn);活動(dòng)的意義

2. 表示并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系:At the beginningAfter;Then

第五步:潤色修改

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