Question

20．假如你是高中生李華，你從報(bào)紙上得到一則某社區(qū)招募暑期照顧老人的家政人員的廣告．你對(duì)此項(xiàng)工作非常感興趣，你希望得到這樣的工作．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)給社區(qū)負(fù)責(zé)人寫(xiě)一封求職信，信的內(nèi)容包括以下幾個(gè)方面：
1．對(duì)這項(xiàng)工作的認(rèn)識(shí)（如對(duì)本人、學(xué)生及社會(huì)的益處等）；
2．個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)（如性格、照顧別人的能力等）；
3．你的計(jì)劃（怎樣照顧老人）．
提示：1．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．詞數(shù)：100個(gè)左右．
Dear Sir or Madam，
　　I have read your advertisement on the newspaper and
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　　I am looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們給招募暑期照顧老人的家政人員的社區(qū)負(fù)責(zé)人寫(xiě)一封求職信，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫(xiě)作需要用第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：對(duì)這項(xiàng)工作的認(rèn)識(shí)（如對(duì)本人、學(xué)生及社會(huì)的益處等）； 個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)（如性格、照顧別人的能力等）； 你的計(jì)劃（怎樣照顧老人）．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為對(duì)做志愿者這項(xiàng)工作的認(rèn)識(shí)．第二部分為個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)．第三部分為
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
be  of great value 非常有價(jià)值
be highly thought of  高度評(píng)價(jià)
in need of 需要
高分句型一：I am very interested in this kind of work，which I think is of great value to us and our society..此句用了which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．
高分句型二：I once worked for a month at a nursing home near my school where I was highly thought of by the old此句I was highly thought of by the old是定語(yǔ)從句，修飾a nursing home．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
　　I have read your advertisement on the newspaper and I think I am the person you are looking for．I am very interested in this kind of work，which I think is of great value to us and our society（高分句型一．）（對(duì)做志愿者這項(xiàng)工作的認(rèn)識(shí)）
     I am kind and patient and happy to help others．I am good at communication and listening．I I once worked for a month at a nursing home near my school where I  was highly thought of by the old（ 高分句型二）．They all said I was a warm-hearted student（個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)）．
      I live next to your nursing home，which is within a walking distance．I can do the job in every afternoon．More importantly，I would like to do something for the old．They are really in need of our love and care．I quite hope you can give me the chance．I am looking forward to hearing from you．（作者的計(jì)劃）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．