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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Time and tide wait no man. My mother is becoming a middle-age woman quietly. She had been busy running after us all the years. My father is very busy every day outside. But the heavy burden falls on my mother's shoulder. Because my school is far from my home, I have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the station every time. I often choose a seat where is close to the window, so I can see her. However, I always can't help run tears from my eyes. All the buildings and people outside the window disappear. I wave gentle to my mother and I look at her till the view of her back disappears. Up to now, even if he is busy, she still does it as usual. The view of my mother's back will never change in my heart.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】 wait后加for

【2】middle-aged

【3】had改成has

【4】 But 改成So

【5】shoulders

【6】 by the train 去掉the

【7】where改成which\that

【8】running

【9】gently

【10】 he 改為she

【解析】

試題分析：作者描述媽媽為他做的一些事情，感激媽媽為他所做的一切。

【1】 wait后加for 考查習(xí)語。Time and tide wait for no man。這是習(xí)語，時不我待。故此處要加for。

【2】middle-aged 考查固定用法。此處是形容詞，意為中年的，middle-aged。

【3】had改成has 考查時態(tài)。此文用一般現(xiàn)在時來描述的，故將had改為has。

【4】 But 改成So 考查連詞。此處前后句 之間是因果關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折，故將But 改成So.

【5】shoulders 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。人的肩膀有兩個，要用復(fù)數(shù)，故改為shoulders。

【6】 by the train 去掉the 考查冠詞。By后接交通工具，中間不能加冠詞，故去掉the。

【7】where改成which\that 考查定語從句。此處為定語從句，缺少主語，故用關(guān)系代詞，先行詞為seat，故改為which。

【8】running 考查動詞。can’t help doing：禁不住做，故改為running。

【9】gently 考查副詞。此處為副詞修飾動詞，故改為gently。

【10】 he 改為she 考查代詞。此處指媽媽，是女性，故將he改為she。