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【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Decades ago there was no such a thin-communication. On September 7th 1987, the global system for mobile communication or GSM were born. And international agreements that laid off the standards and regulation gave rise to a global mobile phone industry.

To be honest, the world’s first mobiles were not so attractive but the range of effectiveness wasn’t very well. But they became a must-have among those wealth people could afford one. However, by taking advantage of GSM which has many different elements, we could all enjoy the ability to go around the world in 217 countries, land in any of it and know a phone will work.

Answer 1

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【解析】這篇文章介紹了手機(jī)的發(fā)展史。

考查冠詞。Communication是不可數(shù)名詞，所以刪除a。

考查主謂一致。the global system for mobile communication or GSM是單數(shù)意義，所以were改成was。

考查固定短語(yǔ)。表示“安排標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和規(guī)則的國(guó)際協(xié)議”lay out安排，是固定用法，所以off改成out。

考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。and連接并列結(jié)構(gòu)，and之前是名詞復(fù)數(shù)，and之后也要用名詞復(fù)數(shù)，所以regulation改成regulations。

考查連詞。the world’s first mobiles were not so attractive 與 the range of effectiveness wasn’t very well.之間是并列關(guān)系，所以but改成and。

考查形容詞。這里表示“實(shí)效范圍也不好”，well表示身體健康的，所以well改成good。

考查形容詞。修飾名詞people，用形容詞，所以wealth改成wealthy。

考查定語(yǔ)從句。who could afford one.是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞wealth people，關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語(yǔ)，指人，所以could前加who或者that。

考查時(shí)態(tài)。表示經(jīng)常反復(fù)發(fā)生的事情，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所以could改成can。

考查代詞。指代前面的217 countries，是復(fù)數(shù)意義，所以it改成them。