Question

【題目】根據以下提示，以My Senior School Life為題寫一篇關于你的高中生活的短文。

1. 我是一名高二學生，在學校學到了很多東西；

2. 學校生活很繁忙，早起晚睡；

3. 有時很勞累，但從來沒有放棄；

4. 學校生活豐富多彩，有很多有趣的活動。

注意：1.詞數100左右；

2. 題目已給出，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

My Senior School Life

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Answer 1

【答案】My Senior School Life

I have been studying in the senior high school for two years. In the past two years, I have learnt a lot. My field of vision is becoming wider, my knowledge is richer and my body is stronger.

I’m very busy at school. There are always a lot of things to do. To finish the learning tasks, I have to get up before seven o’clock, and go to bed at ten o’clock in the evening.

Sometimes I feel very tired and sleepy in class. But I never give up for I strongly believe the old saying: no pains, no gains.

Of course, there are also many interesting activities in our school. We can play basketball, listen to music and play games every day. These activities give us a lot of joy.

My school life is so colorful that I enjoy it very much.

【解析】試題分析：

本文要求，以My Senior School Life為題寫一篇關于你的高中生活的短文。內容包括：

我是一名高二學生，在學校學到了很多東西；學校生活很繁忙，早起晚睡；有時很勞累，但從來沒有放棄；學校生活豐富多彩，有很多有趣的活動。寫作時考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應用虛擬語氣，所以在寫作時，要尤其注意虛擬語氣的表達方式。根據情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】本文內容齊全，重點突出，文章結構布局合理，文中使用高級詞匯和句子。I have been studying in the senior high school for two years.句中使用現在完成進行時態(tài)；My field of vision is becoming wider, my knowledge is richer and my body is stronger.句中巧妙使用比較級；To finish the learning tasks,動詞不定式做目的狀語；I strongly believe the old saying: no pains, no gains.賓語從句中使用諺語恰到好處；My school life is so colorful that I enjoy it very much.句中使用so---that引導結果狀語從句；另外，In the past two years,but，sometomes，also等的運用為文章增色添彩。