Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的城市將有一個大型抗擊新冠肺炎英雄人物展，請寫一封郵件邀請你的朋友Adam同去。內容包括：

1.展出時間和地點；

2. 展出形式與內容；

3. 表達期待。

提示：C0VID-19 （新型冠狀病毒肺炎）； pandemic （流行�。�

注意：1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 結束語已為你寫好。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Adam，

How is everything going recently? A large exhibition about heroes fighting against COVID-19 is scheduled in our city. I am writing to invite you to participate in it.

The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum, starting at 3 pm. on July 12 and lasting approximately three hours. During that period, you will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic, most of whom are doctors and nurses. They are the most courageous people who bravely triumph over the disease. All these will be displayed in the forms of either pictures or videos.

I am convinced that the exhibition is sure to be impressive and you will be deeply moved by their devotion and selflessness. Looking forward to your coming.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文, 要求寫一封郵件。

第一步：

審題：郵件 邀請Adam參加大型抗擊新冠肺炎英雄人物展

人稱：第三人稱

時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時、一般將來時

結構：總分法，分三部分，第一部分提出邀請，第二部分說明展出時間、地點、內容與形式，第三部分期待他的參加。

要點：

1. 提出邀請：邀請Adam參加大型抗擊新冠肺炎英雄人物展

2．展出時間、地點、形式與內容

①時間、地點：7月12 日下午三點，市博物館

②內容：抗擊新冠肺炎疫情的英雄人物展

③形式：圖片或視頻

3．期待他的參加

第二步：列提綱（重點詞匯、短語）

exhibition；hero；fight against；participate in；from all walks of life；courageous；triumph over；display；in the forms of；impressive；be deeply moved by； devotion；selflessness

第三步：連詞成句

(1)A large exhibition is scheduled in our city.

(2)I am writing to invite you to participate in it.

(3)The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum.

(4) The exhibition will start at 3 pm. on July 12.

(5) The exhibition will last approximately three hours.

(6)You will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic.

(7) Most of the heroes are doctors and nurses.

(8)They are the most courageous people.

(9) They bravely triumph over the disease.

(10) All these will be displayed in the forms of either pictures or videos.

(11) I am convinced that the exhibition is sure to be impressive.

(12) You will be deeply moved by their devotion and selflessness.

根據提示和關鍵詞進行遣詞造句,適當地運用句型，注意時態(tài)和主謂一致問題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞、亮點詞匯)

將（4）（5）兩句用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，連接下面三個句子成一個句子

(3)The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum.

(4) The exhibition will start at 3 pm. on July 12.

(5) The exhibition will last approximately three hours.

→The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum, starting at 3 pm. on July 12 and lasting approximately three hours.

用定語從句連接下面兩個句子

(6)You will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic.

(7) Most of the heroes are doctors and nurses.

→ You will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic, most of whom are doctors and nurses.

用定語從句連接下面兩個句子

(8)They are the most courageous people.

(9) They bravely triumph over the disease.

→They are the most courageous people who bravely triumph over the disease.

適當地運用高級詞匯、復雜句式提升文章的檔次，增加文章的可讀性。