Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國好友 Peter 8月份打算來中國旅游，想先學(xué)習(xí)一些中文，卻不知道如何入門。你決定幫助他，寫一份郵件告訴他你的想法。要點如下：

1) 你給他的學(xué)習(xí)建議

2) 介紹你的幫助計劃

3) 對結(jié)果的展望

注意：

1) 詞數(shù)100詞左右；

2) 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；

3) 郵件開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

Dear Peter,

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

Glad to hear that you are going to take a trip to China this August.Welcome!As I know,you are always interested in Chinese culture and want to learn some Chinese.Therefore,I suggest that you choose Chinese daily dlalogues as a start,like greeting people, asking for directions and bargaining for souvenirs,which can help you a lot during your trip.

Learning a foreign language needs great efforts.Apparently,I’d like to be your Teacher and send you an e-book wit my teaching schedule later.Besides,Let’s have an online class over the internet every weekend,through which I will try my best to make your learning easier and surely you can speak some fluent Chinese before your arrival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本題考查書信類作文。首先要認真審題，假定你是李華，你的英國好友 Peter 8月份打算來中國旅游，想先學(xué)習(xí)一些中文，卻不知道如何入門。你決定幫助他，寫一份郵件告訴他你的想法。要點如下：1) 你給他的學(xué)習(xí)建議2) 介紹你的幫助計劃3) 對結(jié)果的展望。其次要確定時態(tài)，表示經(jīng)�；蚍磸�(fù)發(fā)生的事情，所以這篇文章要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。然后要確定文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，文章開頭簡要說明很高興好友來中國旅游，接著就如何學(xué)好中文給出自己的一些建議，文章最后對方承諾自己會盡最大的努力幫好友學(xué)好中文。在寫作過程中，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合題目所給出的信息，不要出現(xiàn)偏題問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有文采。正確使用寫信的格式，詞數(shù)控制在一百左右。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。例如 ：be interested in對……感興趣，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。另外這篇短文還使用了一些高級句型。例如：.Therefore,I suggest that you choose Chinese daily dlalogues as a start,like greeting people, asking for directions and bargaining for souvenirs,which can help you a lot during your trip.這里含有一個賓語從句和一個非限制性定語從句。Besides ,Let’s have an online class over the internet every weekend,through which I will try my best to make your learning easier and surely you can speak some fluent Chinese before your arrival. 這里含有一個非限制性定語從句。