Question

1．假如你是新華中學的學生李華，你校學生會擬下周二下午四點舉行英語口語大賽，你去拜訪校國際部外教Jack，恰巧他外出，請根據以下要點給他留一封短信．
    1．邀請Jack做評委，告知比賽時間、地點等；
    2．詢問賽后是否有時問輔導前兩名選手參加市級比賽．
    注意：1．詞數：l20-150
         2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Jack，
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據所提供的材料信息，寫一封信，告知校國際部外教Jack 學生會擬定下周二下午四點舉行英語口語大賽．寫作要點：1．邀請Jack做評委，告知比賽時間、地點等；2．詢問賽后是否有時間輔導前兩名選手參加市級比賽．
寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
重要短語：happen to do （碰巧做某事），would like to do （想要做某事），as follows（如下），in order to （為了），hold a competition（舉行一個比賽），invite sb to do（邀請某人做某事），be based on （在…基礎上），make some comments on sth （做出評論），set aside（擱置，把…放一邊），in preparation for（為…作準備），think highly of（高度贊揚…）．

【高分句型】
1．You are expected to ask the contestants a few questions based on their speech and make some comments on their performance．
這里是過去分詞短語based on作狀語，主句為You are expected to ask the contestants a few questions，主句的主語為you，與所給動詞base存在邏輯上的被動關系，"sth be based on"．
2．would you be kind enough to set aside some time to help the top two winners in preparation for the City English Speaking Competition？
這里是由動詞不定式作目的狀語，"be+adj+enough to do sth"，介詞短語in preparation for …在整個句中作狀語．
3．I would appreciate it if you could accept our invitation．
這里是it作形式賓語，if you could accept our invitation 是真正的賓語，常用結構為"I appreciate/love/like/dislike/hate等+it+if/when…"．

解答 Dear Jack，
I came to your office to visit you，but you happenedto be out．What I'd like to talk to you is as follows：
In order to improve students'spoken English，the Student's Union will hold an English Speaking Competition at 4p．m．next Tuesday in the School Lecture Hall．【高分句型】We sincerelyinvite you to be a judge if it is convenient for you．You are expected to askthe contestants a few questions based on their speech and make some comments ontheir performance．【高分句型】（邀請Jack做評委，告知比賽時間、地點等）
What's more，would you be kind enough to setaside some time to help the top two winners in preparation for the City EnglishSpeaking Competition？【高分句型】（詢問賽后是否有時間輔導前兩名選手參加市級比賽）
I would appreciate it if you could accept ourinvitation．【高分句型】Your early reply is highly thought of．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．