分析 本文是讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作,這類(lèi)作文可按照三段式模板寫(xiě):第一段:概況所給短文要點(diǎn).第二段:過(guò)渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由.第三段:個(gè)人觀點(diǎn).特別要注意第一段的概括.用自己的語(yǔ)言概括,不能照搬照抄原文. 時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).人稱(chēng)用第一和第三人稱(chēng). 重要短語(yǔ):cancel sth (努力做某事),worry about(推遲),as far as I am concerned(就我所關(guān)注的而言),keep fit (保持健康),as long as (只要),take sb for example (舉某人為例),used to(過(guò)去曾經(jīng)),strengthen sth (加強(qiáng)某事),offer sb time to do(提供某人時(shí)間做某事),in addition(除…之外還),be encouraged to do(被鼓勵(lì)做某事),in short(總之),given appropriate instructions(給予適當(dāng)?shù)闹笇?dǎo)),avoid sth(避免某事),refuse to do(拒絕做某事),for fear of(唯恐).
【高分句型一】
1.The moment I saw them at the school gate,my heart swelled with happiness and excitement.
此處是"The moment+從句"引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句,意為"一…就",主句為"my heart swelled with happiness and excitement".
【高分句型二】
2.Parents are those who I trust most.
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句,先行詞為"those",關(guān)系代詞"who"在從句中作賓語(yǔ).
【高分句型三】
3.Whenever I'm in low spirit,they give me warmth and comfort.
此處是由"whenever"引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句,也可理解成"No matter when I'm in low spirit",主句為"they give me warmth and comfort".
解答 While people have different opinions about what makes them happy,the writer thinks that happiness comes from two fundamental sources:the improvement of one's of life and the sense of contribution.(概括)
Happiness may come form many sources.A good relationship with people around us,a harmonious family or a healthy body can all make people happy.Some people may regard being rich and being loved and valued as the source of happiness.(什么事情能讓人快樂(lè))
My biggest happiness,however,comes form being together with my family.My family are working in another city and I am studying in a boarding school,so we don't see each other often.But last weekend,my parents asked a few days off and came to see me.The moment I saw them at the school gate,my heart swelled with happiness and excitement.【高分句型一】I forget all my stress and tiredness.(快樂(lè)的一次經(jīng)歷)
Parents are those who I trust most.【高分句型二】Whenever I'm in low spirit,they give me warmth and comfort.【高分句型三】For me,nothing in the world compares to the happiness of staying with my parents.(個(gè)人觀點(diǎn):感悟)
點(diǎn)評(píng) 讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作是將閱讀與寫(xiě)作有機(jī)結(jié)合,要求考生既能讀懂文章信息,又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容,其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要,根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說(shuō)明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括,總的來(lái)說(shuō),遵循以下步驟:確定主題句;尋找關(guān)鍵詞;重構(gòu)主題句;重組支持句.寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次,平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型.
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