Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Luca來信詢問你校學(xué)生藝術(shù)選修課的情況。請(qǐng)給他回信，內(nèi)容包括:

1.課程種類:

2.上課方式:

3.你喜歡的選修課。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右:

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫:

3.不得透露考生本入所在學(xué)校及個(gè)人的真實(shí)信息。

參考詞匯:選修課elective

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Luca,

Learning that you are interested in art electives in our school, I’m writing to tell you something about them.

Varieties of courses are provided for us to choose from, such as Chinese Painting, Digital Photography, History of Architecture, etc. Besides taking regular classes, we attend lectures, paint outdoors, and so on. These courses offer us opportunities to improve our abilities to appreciate art.

Of all the courses, I like Chinese Painting best because it helps us experience the inner harmony of man and nature and taste the beauty of Chinese culture.

Looking forward to learning about your school life.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封回信，告知新西蘭朋友Luca有關(guān)你的校學(xué)生藝術(shù)選修課的情況。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：

1.課程種類:

2.上課方式:

3.你喜歡的選修課。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

be interested in; varieties of courses; be provided for; such as; take regular classes; offer sb. sth.; the inner harmony of man and nature; learn about

第三步：連詞成句

1.you are interested in art electives in our school.

2.Varieties of courses are provided for us to choose from, such as…

3.Besides taking regular classes, we attend lectures, paint outdoors, and so on.

4.These courses offer us opportunities to improve our abilities to appreciate art.

5.it helps us experience the inner harmony of man and nature and taste the beauty of Chinese culture

6.Looking forward to learning about your school life.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇

在連句成篇時(shí)，注意語句間的連貫，如果需要可以適當(dāng)使用一些銜接詞。如，to begin with, besides, what’s more, last but not least等。