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3．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每次錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（/\），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Have you ever been to Wuzhen？It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times．Locating in Jiaxing，Zhejiang province，it has a history of about 6，000 years．Like many small towns in the southern area，which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams．Local people live in old houses，they are very friendly．During the day，you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream．The scene at night is attractively as well．There are all kinds of round and square light．Every time I look at the pictures for which I took，I will remember the water，the bridges and the houses．I love an amazing water country!

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分析 本文主要介紹浙江古鎮(zhèn)---烏鎮(zhèn)，它有六千年的歷史，也有許多小橋．晚上有各種各樣的燈，真是一個(gè)令人驚奇的水鄉(xiāng)．

解答 Have you ever been to Wuzhen？It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times．Locating in Jiaxing，Zhejiang province，it has a history of about 6，000 years．Like many small towns in the southern area，which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams．Local people live in old houses，∧they are very friendly．During the day，you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream．The scene at night is attractively as well．There are all kinds of round and square light．Every time I look at the pictures for which I took，I will remember the water，the bridges and the houses．I love an amazing water country!
詳解：
1．had改為have 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．根據(jù)句中already及many times，表示visit雖然發(fā)生在過去，但對現(xiàn)在造成了影響，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．
2．Locating改為Located 考查過去分詞．it與locate之間是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，用過去分詞作狀語．be located in意為"位于，坐落于"．
3．which改為it 考查代詞．Like many small towns in the southern area是介詞短語，不需要用連詞連接，it指代Wuzhen．
4．through改為over/across 考查介詞．a(chǎn)cross表示動(dòng)作是在某一物體的表面進(jìn)行的； through表示動(dòng)作是在三維空間進(jìn)行的，四面八方都有東西．a(chǎn)cross和over兩者都表示從一側(cè)向另一側(cè)的運(yùn)動(dòng)．本文應(yīng)是在表面通過，用across或over．
5．加and 考查連詞．在英語中，兩個(gè)分句之間用一個(gè)連詞，此處表示并列關(guān)系，用and連接．
6．enjoying改為enjoy 考查動(dòng)詞不定式．此處動(dòng)詞不定式表示目的，作目的狀語．
7．a(chǎn)ttractively改為attractive 考查形容詞．be動(dòng)詞后用形容詞作表語．
8．light改為lights 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．light是可數(shù)名詞，其前有all kinds of修飾時(shí)用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
9．去掉for 考查定語從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語從句，先行詞pictures在從句中作賓語，take pictures意為"拍照"，不需要介詞for．
10．a(chǎn)n改為the 考查冠詞．此處amazing water country指Wuzhen，表示特指用定冠詞the．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．