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15．讀者王彬?qū)懶沤o某雜志"開心"欄目記者M(jìn)ary，詢問怎么才會(huì)感到幸福，請根據(jù)提示給他寫一封回信，主題為How to Be Happy．
提示：1．幸福是人生最寶貴的東西．
2．憑良心做事，善待他人．
3．注重健康．
4．遇到挫折時(shí)要保持樂觀．
注意：1．作文詞數(shù)150個(gè)左右．
2．根據(jù)提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Wang Bin，
I'm glad to receive your letter，in which you asked me about how to be happy．I'm writing to tell you what I think about it．
In my opinion，happiness is the most precious thing in life．Without it，a man will feel discouraged and life will be dark and terrible．（高分句型一）How to be happy then？Firstly，doeverything out of conscience，and try to do it best，which will make yourself feel happy and satisfied．（高分 句型二）Secondly，treat others as you would have others do to you，that is to say，treat others sincerely．In addition，pay attention to your health，which is the root of success and happiness．（高分句型三）Remember it's no use being worried and sad．When you meet with some hard situation，you must try to overcome it without any hesitation．Last but not least，live every day in an optimistic way．If you share the ideas above with me，you'll find your life is full of happiness all the time．（高分句型四）
Best wishes，
Mary．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息讀者王彬?qū)懶沤o某雜志"開心"欄目記者M(jìn)ary，詢問怎么才會(huì)感到幸福，請根據(jù)提示給他寫一封回信，主題為How to Be Happy，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：幸福是人生最寶貴的東西．憑良心做事，善待他人．注重健康．遇到挫折時(shí)要保持樂觀 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：In my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)來看；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；In addition另外；Last but not least最后同樣最重要；pay attention to關(guān)注；be full of 充滿了
Without it，a man will feel discouraged and life will be dark and terrible．（高分句型一）
Firstly，doeverything out of conscience，and try to do it best，which will make yourself feel happy and satisfied．（高分 句型二）
In addition，pay attention to your health，which is the root of success and happiness．（高分句型三）
If you share the ideas above with me，you'll find your life is full of happiness all the time．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear_Wang_Bin，
I'm_glad_to_receive_your_letter，_in_which_you_asked_me_about_how_to_be_happy． I'm writing to tell you what I think about it．
In my opinion，happiness is the most precious thing in life．Without it，a man will feel discouraged and life will be dark and terrible．（高分句型一）How to be happy then？Firstly，doeverything out of conscience，and try to do it best，which will make yourself feel happy and satisfied．（高分 句型二）Secondly，treat others as you would have others do to you，that is to say，treat others sincerely．In addition，pay attention to your health，which is the root of success and happiness．（高分句型三）Remember it's no use being worried and sad．When you meet with some hard situation，you must try to overcome it without any hesitation．Last but not least，live every day in an optimistic way．If you share the ideas above with me，you'll find your life is full of happiness all the time．（高分句型四）
Best_wishes，
Mary

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