Question

7．假如你是李華，你在美國的筆友 Henry 在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上偶然讀到了有關(guān)2014 年開封菊花花會的帖子，對此很感興趣．他來信詢問有關(guān)菊花花會的相關(guān)情況．請你根據(jù)下表提示的內(nèi)容給 Henry 回一封信．

始創(chuàng)于	1983年
會期	每年10月18日-11月18日
展區(qū)	龍亭公園為主會場，其它各個(gè)公園均有展區(qū)
活動內(nèi)容	賞菊；觀看精彩節(jié)目（歷史短劇，服裝秀等），品嘗開封小吃

注意：
1．詞數(shù)100 左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
4．參考詞匯：菊花花會-Chrysanthemum Festival．
Dear Henry．Dear Henry，
I'm very happy to learn that you are interested in our city flower-chrysanthemum．Now I'd like to introduce the Chrysanthemum Festival．
The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983，enjoying a history of over 30 years．From then on，it is held from October 18 to November 18 every year．During the festival，a variety of attractive chrysanthemums are displayed in Longting Park as well as in other parks．There is no doubt that visitors can admire beautiful chrysanthemums there．Besides，there are wonderful performances in the parks，such as historical short plays，and costume shows．Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice．
I am looking forward to your visit next year．．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息寫一篇短文，詢問有關(guān)2014年開封菊花花會的情況．寫作要點(diǎn)：1．花會始創(chuàng)時(shí)間；2．會期；3．展區(qū)；4．活動內(nèi)容． 既是提綱作文又是圖表類作文．
寫作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主．人稱以第三人稱為主．
重要短語：be interested in（感興趣），enjoy a history of （享受…的歷史），a variety of （很多，各種各樣的），as well as （和，又，也），admire sth （欣賞…），such as （例如），enjoy delicious local snacks（享受當(dāng)?shù)氐拿牢缎〕裕�，look forward to…（期望做某事）．
【高分句型】
1．The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983，enjoying a history of over 30 years．
這里是現(xiàn)在分詞enjoying作伴隨狀語，主句為The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983，主句的主語the first Chrysanthemum Festival 與所給動詞enjoy存在邏輯上的主動關(guān)系．
2．There is no doubt that visitors can admire beautiful chrysanthemums there．
這里是固定句型"There is no doubt that …"，意為"毫無疑問…"．此句為同位語從句．
3．Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice．
這里是動名詞作主語，主語為Enjoying delicious local snacks，謂語動詞為is，is之后是表語．

解答 Dear Henry，
I'm very happy to learnthat you are interested in our city flower-chrysanthemum．Now I'd like to introduce the Chrysanthemum Festival．（開頭-引出話題）
The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983，enjoying ahistory of over 30 years．【高分句型】（始創(chuàng)于） 
From then on，it is held from October 18 to November 18 every year．（會期） During the festival，a variety of attractive chrysanthemums are displayed inLongting Park as well as in other parks．（展區(qū)）
There is no doubt that visitors canadmire beautiful chrysanthemums there．【高分句型】Besides，there arewonderful performances in the parks，such ashistorical short plays，and costume shows．Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice．【高分句型】（活動內(nèi)容）
I am looking forward to your visit next year．

點(diǎn)評 寫好這類圖表及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．