Question

20．假設(shè)你現(xiàn)在正參加一場(chǎng)英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你抽到的演講題目是Smile for Life，and Every Day will be Sunshine，請(qǐng)你就該話題展開演講．你的演講必須包含以下三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容：
1．你對(duì)此話的理解； 2．用一個(gè)事例來(lái)支持你的理解； 3．總結(jié)發(fā)言．
注意：詞數(shù)120左右．首尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Ladies and Gentlemen，
It's my honour to give a speech here．My topic of speech is"Smile for Life，and Every Day will be Sunshine"．
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Thanks for your attention!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Once we adopt a positive attitude towars life，we may overcome whatever difficulty there is in our way，realize our dreams and gain success．一旦我們對(duì)生活采取一種積極的態(tài)度，我們會(huì)克服在我們道路上的不論什么困難，也會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)我們的夢(mèng)想，取得成功．
句型二：As①we can see in the story，it②is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all．在這個(gè)故事中我們可以看到，樂觀的態(tài)度是最重要的．
本句話是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，首先是一個(gè)as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，as在這個(gè)從句中作see的賓語(yǔ)．另外，主句包含了一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，強(qiáng)調(diào)的是主語(yǔ) an optimistic attitude．

解答 Ladies and Gentlemen，
     It's my honour to give a speech here．My topic of speech is"Smile for Life，and Every Day will be Sunshine"． It conveys the message that positive attitude really counts in our life．Once we adopt a positive attitude towars life，we may overcome whatever difficulty there is in our way，realize our dreams and gain success．（高分句型一，用于引起下文，總領(lǐng)全文）
     Here I share one of my experiences with you．With the College Entrance Examination drawing near，I was filled with great anxiety．Under great pressure，I couldn't apply myself to study，resulting in failing an important examination．And you can guess，I got very frustrated．I remember clearly when I was in a bad mood，my headteacher，Miss Zhang，approached me and gave me a badge with a big smile on it and said，"In life we all have those moments when we can't achieve what we want．It is natural．Don't allow those moments to weaken you，but turn them into motivation and let them inspire you．"The badge she gave to me was a reminder which provided me with constant encouragement to smile for life．Consequently，I gained what I deserved in the next examination．
     As we can see in the story，it is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all．（高分句型二，用于總結(jié)上文，承上啟下）It gives you the confidence to confront tough difficulties and with smile，you can improve your result to achieve anything you want in life．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇書面表達(dá)是一個(gè)半開放的寫作．半開放性寫作給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大．對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力．在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣才可以更好的駕馭．同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides，further，last but not least等．在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．