11.中美中學(xué)生交流項(xiàng)目安排一批美國中學(xué)生來華一周體驗(yàn)中國文化,現(xiàn)網(wǎng)上挑選適合住宿的家庭(homestay family).假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華,愿意接受一位美國學(xué)生人住你家,請(qǐng)用英語給項(xiàng)目美方負(fù)責(zé)人David Smith寫一封郵件,說明你的家庭和住宿條件、你本人的優(yōu)勢以及你幫助美國中學(xué)生體驗(yàn)中國文化的打算.
注意:1.詞數(shù)120-150.
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié).
分析 這是一篇開放式作文,寫作時(shí)不僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯,而是要添加些內(nèi)容,使文章看起來更充實(shí),要組成一篇通順連貫的短文.需要注意緊扣文章主題,給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括,缺一不可.寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,一定要契合給出的開頭,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次.
亮點(diǎn)句型一:My parents,who are kind and easygoing in nature,are in favor of my idea that I host an American student.我的父母天性善良隨和,他們贊成我的想法,我要接待一個(gè)美國學(xué)生.本句 中who are kind and easygoing in nature,引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句,先行詞是My parents,關(guān)系代詞who在從句中做主語.
亮點(diǎn)句型二:If an American student stays with us,I'll be a good guide to some local places of interest and some typical towns and villages in our area.如果一個(gè)美國學(xué)生和我們?cè)谝黄�,我�?huì)很好地引導(dǎo)他們?nèi)ノ覀兊貐^(qū)的一些景點(diǎn)和一些典型的城鎮(zhèn)、村莊.If an American student stays with us引導(dǎo)的是條件狀語從句,用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),主句用將來時(shí).
解答 Dear Sir,
I am writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the homestay families for the American students.
My parents,who are kind and easygoing in nature,are in favor of my idea that I host an American student.(亮點(diǎn)句型一)We live in a beautiful community.Luckily,we have an extra room for guests.I am a student of Xinhua middle school,openminded and enthusiastic.What's more,I'm quite good at English and we can
communicate well in English.
If an American student stays with us,I'll be a good guide to some local places of interest and some typical towns and villages in our area.(亮點(diǎn)句型二)My parents and I will help her/him to make Chinese meals,such as jiaozi,noodles and other foods.
We have the confidenee to make the American student feel at home and have some sweet memories.
Looking forward to your reply.
點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.