Question

【題目】假定你是李華， 暑假你參加了英國(guó)游學(xué)活動(dòng)，住在房東Tricia家中， 回國(guó)后給房東寫一封信表示感謝， 要點(diǎn)如下：

1、安全抵家

2、回顧英國(guó)游學(xué)體會(huì)

3、感謝房東的幫助

4、附寄兩張合影

5、表達(dá)愿望

注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右。

2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3、結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。

Dear Tricia,

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tricia,

I’ve come back home safely . Looking back to my stay in Britain, I felt so happy and satisfied. The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot . I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students. More importantly , your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British cultural adapt to the life there . So I’m so grateful to you .

By the way , attached to the letter are two photos taken with you , which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together.

You are expected to come to China soon.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這篇文章屬于提綱式要點(diǎn)作文，要求學(xué)生就所給內(nèi)容寫一封感謝信，是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材，體現(xiàn)了英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實(shí)用性，生活型的原則。應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn)：1）注意人稱，應(yīng)該用第一人稱的形式給房東（第二人稱）寫感謝信；2）注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用：從試題的內(nèi)容上可以看出在表達(dá)要點(diǎn)1和2時(shí)應(yīng)用過(guò)去時(shí)；而其他要點(diǎn)則需要注意時(shí)態(tài)的替換。3）注意恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語(yǔ)，是各個(gè)要點(diǎn)間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達(dá)不是簡(jiǎn)單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)合理的組成比較通順的語(yǔ)句，因此要仔細(xì)組織語(yǔ)言，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語(yǔ)言方面，要特別注意簡(jiǎn)潔明了，開頭要開門見山。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子：Looking back to回顧，impress，benefited a lot from doing受益匪淺，have a better understanding o更好的掌握，adapt to，be grateful to感激，By the way順便，attached to附帶，remind of，which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together是一句定語(yǔ)從句。