Question

3．假如你是遵義市某一中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華，與在你市學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的美國(guó)朋友Jack約好一起去公園滑冰，因家里有事不能赴約．請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件表示歉意，說明不能赴約的原因并另約一個(gè)時(shí)間．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右．
2．應(yīng)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Jack，
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to go skating with you on this Saturday morning．（高分句型一）I was told that my grandparents will pay a visit to us that morning and have a big family party．（高分句型二）I do hope the change will not bring you any trouble．
I am wondering if you could make it on Sunday morning．We can start out early so that we'll have enough time to practise the skills and enjoy the view in the park．（高分句型三）If it's convenient for you，let's meet at 8：00 at the NO.6 bus stop．If not，please let me know what time suits you best．I should be free any time after school next week．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是遵義市某一中學(xué)高二學(xué)生李華，與在你市學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的美國(guó)朋友Jack約好一起去公園滑冰，因家里有事不能赴約．請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件表示歉意，說明不能赴約的原因并另約一個(gè)時(shí)間，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be unable to 不能做某事；pay a visit to拜訪；so that以便，為了；If not如果不的話；
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to go skating with you on this Saturday morning．（高分句型一）
I was told that my grandparents will pay a visit to us that morning and have a big family party．（高分句型二）
We can start out early so that we'll have enough time to practise the skills and enjoy the view in the park．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
       I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to go skating with you on this Saturday morning．（高分句型一）I was told that my grandparents will pay a visit to us that morning and have a big family party．（高分句型二）I do hope the change will not bring you any trouble．
       I am wondering if you could make it on Sunday morning．We can start out early so that we'll have enough time to practise the skills and enjoy the view in the park．（高分句型三）If it's convenient for you，let's meet at 8：00 at the NO.6 bus stop．If not，please let me know what time suits you best．I should be free any time after school next week．
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．