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3．假定你是中學生李華．高三將是辛苦忙碌的一年，不管自己還是父母都會很辛苦．每個家長都是望子成龍的，處在這一重要的階段，父母會對你的生活學習倍加關心．現(xiàn)在請你按照以下內(nèi)容要點給自己的父母寫一封感謝信．（100詞左右）
內(nèi)容要點：
1．感謝父母這么多年來無微不至的關心；
2．近段時間自己的學習情況及取得的進步，自己會繼續(xù)努力，希望父母放心；
3．高三過后一定多幫父母做家務．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出．
Dar parents，
                                                           
Love from，
Your son．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇書信，要求給父母寫一封感謝信，文章有幾點要求：1．感謝父母這么多年來無微不至的關心；2．近段時間自己的學習情況及取得的進步，自己會繼續(xù)努力，希望父母放心；3．高三過后一定多幫父母做家務．寫文章時要注意以下幾點：全面覆蓋要點；人稱、稱呼要符合高三學生的心情和身份；注意不能有語法和時態(tài)的錯誤．
【亮點說明】文章要點齊全，表達思路明確，知識點運用恰當?shù)轿�，文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如 nothing but，express表達，try my best to盡力，accomplish my assignment，set your minds，intend to想要，in order to，going well with，words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the care you have shown me over the past years是一句從句，I intend to help you do some housework，which I have seldom done before是非限制性定語從句，Do relax!是強調(diào)句．
The hardest time of my life is coming，and I know that you both are very worried about my studies and my life．（高分句型一）
I can say nothing but thanks to you on this special occasion，because words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the care you have shown me over the past years．（高分句型二）
After the college entrance examination，I intend to help you do some housework，which I have seldom done before．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear parents，
      The hardest time of my life is coming，and I know that you both are very worried about my studies and my life．（高分句型一） I can say nothing but thanks to you on this special occasion，because words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the care you have shown me over the past years．（高分句型二）These days I have been studying hard and have performed to the best of my abilities in the test．I'll try my best to accomplish my assignment in the days to come．Please set your minds at rest．
      After the college entrance examination，I intend to help you do some housework，which I have seldom done before．（高分句型三）And I want to learn to cook in order to prepare a dinner personally for you both．
      My dear parents，everything is going well with me．Do relax!
                                                                                                                                                                                               Love from，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Your son

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧