Question

【題目】假定你是李華。你校外籍教師Peter計(jì)劃在暑假期間回國,他想送給母親可以代表中國文化的禮物。請你給他寫一封郵件,向他推薦禮物。內(nèi)容包括:

1.推薦禮物:旗袍、中國結(jié)等;

2.推薦原因:

3.表達(dá)祝福。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯:旗袍Qipao;中國結(jié)Chinese knot

Dear Peter，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture. And I’m writing to give you some advice.

Personally I think you should buy the following gifts: Qipao and Chinese knot. Qipao, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese woman can show the real beauty of a woman. I’m sure your mother will like it very much. What’s more, It’s also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot. It’s usually hung in the sitting room or cars, which represents good luck.

Wish you a good vacation. Please give my best wishes to your family.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封電子郵件。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件：假定你是李華。你校外籍教師Peter計(jì)劃在暑假期間回國,他想送給母親可以代表中國文化的禮物。請你給他寫一封郵件,向他推薦禮物。內(nèi)容包括:1.推薦禮物:旗袍、中國結(jié)等;2.推薦原因:3.表達(dá)祝福。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：want to buy some gifts（想買一些禮物）；writing to give you some advice（寫信給你一些建議）；represents good luck（代表好運(yùn)氣）；等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。