Question

互聯(lián)網(wǎng)給人們的生活、工作帶來了很多便利。但網(wǎng)上存在的許多涉及暴力、欺騙等不良

現(xiàn)象也影響了青少年的健康成長。請結(jié)合下面的圖片，談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶�。具體要求如下：

    1．簡要敘述因特網(wǎng)給人們生活和工作所帶來的便利；

    2．結(jié)合下圖簡要分析因特網(wǎng)所帶來的弊端；

    3．針對弊端談?wù)勀愕目捶�及�?yīng)采取的措施。（至少2點(diǎn)）

    注意：詞數(shù)：100一120，文章開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）。

    There is no doubt that we have benefited a lot from the Internet in our everyday life.

                                                                        

                                                                         

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                         

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                         

                                                                        

Answer 1

One possible version：

    There is no doubt that we have benefited a lot from the Internet in our everyday life．We can

read news，watch films，keep in touch with our relatives，make friends，or play games to get relaxed on the Intermit．

But every coin has two sides．The Internet also has bad effects on people．especially on teenagers. Things such as violence and cheating，often appear on the Internet．seriously polluting

their hearts and soul．Consequently, children will gradually lose interest in their studies．

Now，it's high time for the government to take effective measures to purify the Internet

environment．Some websites that disobey the rules should be made public and closed up．As

students，we should protect ourselves by keeping on guard against the bad influence of the Internet．I'm sure we will have a better online environment soon so that the Internet can serve us better.

書面表達(dá)評分原則：

    1．上文僅為參考范文，學(xué)生可用不同的語言表達(dá)形式來表述要點(diǎn)。

    2．本題總分為30分，按以下5個檔次給分。評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。

第一檔：(1—6分)只能寫出一兩個要點(diǎn)；語言錯誤很多，只有個別句子正確；

第二檔：(7—12分)能寫出部分要點(diǎn)；語言錯誤多，影響意思表達(dá)；

第三檔：(13—18分)能寫明基本要點(diǎn)；語言雖有較多錯誤，但能基本達(dá)意；

第四檔：(19—24分)能寫明全部或絕大部分要點(diǎn)；語言有少量錯誤；行文不夠連貫，

表達(dá)基本清楚；

    第五檔：(25—30分)能寫明全部要點(diǎn)；語言基本無誤；行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚。

    4．詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去1分。

    5．評分時，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：時態(tài)、人稱、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量利準(zhǔn)確。上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。

    6．拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個方面，評分時，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。

    7．如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個檔次。