Question

【題目】An old man went to live with his son, daughterinlaw, and fouryearold grandson. The family ate together at the table, but his shaky hands and failing sight made eating difficult. Peas rolled off his spoon onto the floor. When he grasped the glass, milk spilled on the tablecloth. The son and daughterinlaw became angry with the mess. So they set a small table in the corner. There Grandfather ate alone while they enjoyed dinner.

Since Grandfather had broken a dish or two, his food was served in a wooden bowl. Still, the only words the couple had for him were sharp when he dropped a fork or spilled food. The grandson watched silently. One evening, the father noticed the son playing with wood scraps(碎塊) and asked the child sweetly, “What are you making?” The boy responded, “Oh, I am making a bowl for you and Mum to eat your food in when I grow up.”

The words struck the parents so hard that they were speechless. Then tears started to stream down their cheeks. The son gently led Grandfather back to their table. From then on, he ate every meal with them. Neither of them seemed to care any longer when a fork was dropped, milk spilled, or the tablecloth soiled.

寫作內(nèi)容

1．用約30個單詞概括故事的主要情節(jié)；

2．用約120個單詞就“關(guān)愛老人”這個主題發(fā)表你的看法，并包括如下要點：

(1)結(jié)合你的實際生活，談?wù)勗陉P(guān)愛老人方面，你平時是怎樣做的。

(2)就老年人應(yīng)該得到的待遇發(fā)表你的看法并闡明理由。

寫作要求

1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；

3．不必寫標題。

評分標準

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。

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Answer 1

【答案】The story tells us that the grandfather was treated badly by his son and daughterinlaw and the change of the couple’s attitudes after they saw their son was preparing bowls for them.

As for me, I always showed my respect and love to the old, my grandparents in particular. When I was young, I brought my questions to them for help often, which made them busy but happy. I formed a habit to take a walk with them after dinner, talking about my study, ambitions and their rich experience.

In my opinion, we should treat the old people just like what we want to be treated when we are old. Honor and respect should be given to them by their relatives and the whole society, because they are in poor health, bad mental conditions, and can’t manage everything by themselves. Besides, they’ve already contributed a lot to their family and society and they deserve love from us all.

【解析】本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)寫作，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達給了一段材料，先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，文章講述了一個小故事，告訴我們對老人要孝順，因為我們的孩子看著我們，他們會學習我們的樣子。再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點去表達，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。

【亮點說明】這篇范文要點全面，語言精煉，簡單句和復雜句交叉使用：如The story tells us that the grandfather was treated badly by his son and daughterinlaw and the change of the couple’s attitudes after they saw their son was preparing bowls for them.

這里使用了賓語從句；When I was young, I brought my questions to them for help often, which made them busy but happy.這里使用了時間狀語從句和非限制性定語從句。這篇范文使用了許多高級短語和詞匯，例如：form a habit，in particular等。