Question

假設(shè)2008年2月12日是你父親的生日，下面三幅圖描繪的是你給父親買完禮物后乘坐地鐵回家時(shí)經(jīng)歷的一件事。請根據(jù)圖示，用英語寫一篇日記記敘這件事，并談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋?/p>

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)不少于100；

2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

Februay 12 th,2008

The day is my Dad’s birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown, and bought a present for him. Then I took the subway train home. Sitting on the train, I thought my dad would be very happy when he saw the present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bags got on the train and stood in front of me. She looked tired. I hesitated for a moment, and then offered my seat to her. The old lady thanked me a lot and sat down. Seeing her smile,I felt happy. I will always be ready to help others in the future.

解析:

寫作要點(diǎn)：

1. 本文的命題形式為漢語提示+三副圖畫，記敘+議論，體裁為日記，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去式主。

2．?dāng)⑹鍪虑榘l(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)

3. 為爸爸買生日禮物

4．買完生日禮物后，坐地鐵回家

5．見老奶奶提著重物，找不到座位

6．為老奶奶讓座

7．看到老奶奶笑容，倍受鼓舞，決心以后更多的幫助別人