【題目】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩赴，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（八），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

As a proverb goes, “Preparedness ensures success and unpreparedness spells failure”. It can’t be denied whether good preparation is one of the essentials of success.

The first two years of my junior middle school life went so smoothly and I got very good grades in every exam that I took it for granted that I am sure to be admitted by a key high school. However，in my junior three, I began totally loosening myself up and no longer focused on study. It is no accident that my academic performance declined sharp. Until the last month of my junior three did I realize it and concentrated on learning again. However, it was too late to make full preparation for then— I failed in the senior high school entrance examination.

From my experience, I see that at no time we should ignore the importance of making good preparation, and that success belongs to those whom can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts.

【答案】

【1】第二句中whether改為that

【2】第三句中very改為so

【3】第三句中am改為was

【4】第四句中However改為thus或者so

【5】第四句中loose改為loosening

【6】第五句中

【7】第六句中until 前加not

【8】第七句中去掉for

【9】第八句中we should改為should we

【10】第八句中whom改為who

【解析】

【1】第二句中whether改為that;固定句型 It can’t be denied that...不可否認的是……；其中it 為形式主語，that引導(dǎo)的從句為真正的主語。

【2】第三句中very改為so;根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)，so...that...后半句充當(dāng)結(jié)果狀語，句意：在考試中得到較高的分數(shù)，所以想當(dāng)然地認為自己肯定會被重點高中所錄取。故將very改為so

【3】第三句中am改為was；根據(jù)上下文章講述的是我過去的事情，故全文基本時態(tài)為一般過去時，故am改為was

【4】第四句中However改為thus或者so；根據(jù)上一句的意思表達想當(dāng)然地認為自己肯定會被重點高中所錄取，結(jié)果，在三年級的時候放松了自己并且不在專心于學(xué)習(xí)，所以通過理解前后兩者是因果的關(guān)系，故將However改為thus或者so

【5】第四句中loose改為loosening；根據(jù)所在句意我放松了自己并且不在專心于學(xué)習(xí)；loose為形容詞，其動詞形式為loosen,在這里做began 的賓語。故將loose改為loosening

【6】sharp改為sharply；本句句意為我的學(xué)習(xí)成績急劇下滑，需要用sharply副詞來修飾動作decline.故將sharp改為sharply

【7】第六句中until 前加not;本句中應(yīng)由not until 來引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句，主句謂語動詞部分倒裝，從后面的主句did I realize it and concentrated on learning again我才意識到這一點并集中精力去學(xué)習(xí)。故until 前加not

【8】第七句中去掉for；短語make full preparation (for sth);(為……)作充分準(zhǔn)備；本句中后面沒有出現(xiàn)相應(yīng)的賓語。故去掉for

【9】第八句中we should改為should we；句首出現(xiàn)了表否定的結(jié)構(gòu)at no time，所以主句謂語動詞部分部分倒裝，句意：我們絕不能忽視做好充分準(zhǔn)備的重要性……故將we should改為should we。

【10】第八句中whom改為who. who引導(dǎo)定語從句，并充當(dāng)從句的主語，而引導(dǎo)詞whom只能充當(dāng)從句的賓語。故將whom改為who

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