Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面材料，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。

Recently a piece of news about a child pouring ink and his parents’ education method has aroused a heated discussion among netizens. A 7-year-old naughty boy poured some ink out of a window on the 7th floor, not only dirtying the clothes on the neighbors’ balconies downstairs, but also staining the windows, walls and floors. Hearing about the situation, the parents made apologies from door to door with their son. Meanwhile, they brought home the neighbors’ stained clothes to wash and compensated for their losses. In addition, the parents paid for professionals to clean the polluted walls, in front of which their son was kept standing in the sun and watching them being cleaned.

The news resonated (共鳴) with netizens in that many families have such children, who often make mistakes. High praise has been given to the couple for the method of educating their son. Instead of beating or scolding him, the couple took their responsibility as parents and punished their son to make him aware of the consequences of improper behavior.

（寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容）

1. 用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 你如何看待該父母處理此事的方式，并給出理由;

3. 請(qǐng)針對(duì)孩子犯錯(cuò)，給出合理的應(yīng)對(duì)建議（不少于兩點(diǎn)）；

4. 結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勀銜?huì)如何回報(bào)親情。

（寫(xiě)作要求）

1. 寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不得直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。

（評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）

內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇辦連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Having poured ink out of the window and dirtied the public area alongside the neighbor's clothes, a naughty boy was taught to take responsibility by his parents, whose education method won widespread recognition online.

I also sing high praises for the couple's parenting style. Specifically, rather than shrink from the terrible consequences of their son’s misbehavior, the couple apologized to the neighbors, compensated for their losses and mended the vandalized areas. It is their graceful manner and sincere attitude that leave a deep impression on the badly-behaved son, who, after a deep reflection, will reform himself and turn over a new leaf.

Should a kid commit mistakes, firstly, parents need fully understand the kid’s motive behind. Secondly, proper rules and disciplines should be introduced within the family so that a misbehaved kid will have to face the music after he gets his way. Thirdly, parents should work closely with teachers and instill within kids a correct moral sense. After all, the ability to distinguish between right and wrong will guide children to the right track and shape them into an upright future citizen.

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生閱讀材料，按照要求寫(xiě)一篇文章。

第一步: 審題

體裁: 應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu): 總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容。

要求：

1.用約30個(gè)單詞概述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 你如何看待該父母處理此事的方式，并給出理由;

3. 請(qǐng)針對(duì)孩子犯錯(cuò)，給出合理的應(yīng)對(duì)建議（不少于兩點(diǎn)）；

4. 結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勀銜?huì)如何回報(bào)親情。

第二步: 列提綱 (重點(diǎn)詞組)

out of；take responsibility ；rather than ；sing high praises for ；apologize to ；look forward to；

第三步: 連詞成句

Having poured ink out of the window and dirtied the public area alongside the neighbor's clothes, a naughty boy was taught to take responsibility by his parents, whose education method won widespread recognition online.

Specifically, rather than shrink from the terrible consequences of their son’s misbehavior, the couple apologized to the neighbors, compensated for their losses and mended the vandalized areas.

It is their graceful manner and sincere attitude that leave a deep impression on the badly-behaved son, who, after a deep reflection, will reform himself and turn over a new leaf.

Should a kid commit mistakes, firstly, parents need fully understand the kid’s motive behind.

Secondly, proper rules and disciplines should be introduced within the family so that a misbehaved kid will have to face the music after he gets his way.

Thirdly, parents should work closely with teachers and instill within kids a correct moral sense.

After all, the ability to distinguish between right and wrong will guide children to the right track and shape them into an upright future citizen.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步: 連句成篇 (銜接詞)

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步: 潤(rùn)色修改