Question

假如你是李明，你跟你的e-pal  Paul聊天，他表示學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大，請(qǐng)你給他發(fā)封電子郵件，安慰他并給他提一些建議。  

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

將自己的問(wèn)題告訴老師和同學(xué)，請(qǐng)求得到他們的幫助。

不要總想著考試成績(jī)，要多想想自己在哪些方面進(jìn)步了，這樣會(huì)更自信。

多做運(yùn)動(dòng)，運(yùn)動(dòng)可以幫助自己緩解壓力，并且有助于睡眠。

你對(duì)他的祝福。

【寫(xiě)作要求】

用120個(gè)字左右表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容，并組成一篇連貫的短文。（信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。）寫(xiě)作中可能使用的詞匯: 緩解壓力 relieve stress.

Dear Paul,

I quite understand the great trouble you are suffering from.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Paul,

I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. I suggest you communicate your trouble to your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them. You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out. Instead, you should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence. In addition, I advise you to do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress, because sports will also help you sleep better at night.

I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.

                                               Yours sincerely,

                                                          Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析： 本文屬于提綱類(lèi)短文，用來(lái)安慰別人并提出一些建議，使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來(lái)：1.將自己的問(wèn)題告訴老師和同學(xué)，請(qǐng)求得到他們的幫助。2.不要總想著考試成績(jī)，要多想想自己在哪些方面進(jìn)步了，這樣會(huì)更自信。3.多做運(yùn)動(dòng)，運(yùn)動(dòng)可以幫助自己緩解壓力，并且有助于睡眠。4.你對(duì)他的祝福。要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本句中使用了較為高級(jí)的詞匯sympathize，communicate；還有較多的高級(jí)句式，如Instead, you should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence.中的which指代前面的一句話的內(nèi)容，在句中做主語(yǔ)。還有原因狀語(yǔ)從句because sports will also help you sleep better at night.

考點(diǎn)：考察提綱類(lèi)短文