Question

【題目】假如你是李華，請你給在外地讀書，正在生病的朋友王鵬寫一封說服性信函，說明鍛煉的重要性和好處，鼓勵他積極鍛煉身體，從而為更好地學習打下基礎。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2．開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Wang Peng,

I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now._______________________________________________________________

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_________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Peng,

I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have been so absorbed in study that you have had no time for exercise. But it is really harmful to your health. I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in future.

In fact, exercise can contribute to your health and fresh your mind. After one or two hours of exercise you can study better. Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling bad or ill. Otherwise, your study will be interrupted from time to time by sickness.

In a word, exercise is as useful and important as your study. So I put forward a suggestion that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day from now on.

I would be more than happy to see you have a stronger body.

Best wishes

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是李華，請你給在外地讀書，正在生病的朋友王鵬寫一封說服性信函，說明鍛煉的重要性和好處，鼓勵他積極鍛煉身體，從而為更好地學習打下基礎。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2．開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點說明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時運用高級句子。So……that 句型的使用：You have been so absorbed in study that you have had no time for exercise.條件狀語從句的使用：I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in future.倒裝句的使用勘稱完美：Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling bad or ill.連接詞的使用也使文章增色不少：But；In fact, Otherwise, In a word。