Question

【題目】作為一名中學(xué)生，你在成長的過程中會學(xué)到很多東西，如：如何有愛心、承擔(dān)責(zé)任、學(xué)會感恩、

Answer 1

【答案】

A good friend can be our reliable companion while with a bad one we may easily get lost. I’ve learned this from my own experience.

Once before a test, my friend Joy and I came into the classroom, where several classmates gathered aroud, writing something excitedly. I was shocked when one of them told us secretly, “My friend in another class finished the test yesterday. I’ll share you the right answers!” I tried to find any signs of shame on her face but failed. I refused her “generous” offer when Joy patted me on the shoulder, whispering, “We needn’t follow them.”

To my understanding, friends, like books, if well chosen, will greatly benefit us. Never should we keep bad company.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇談看法的寫作。在成長的過程中會學(xué)到很多東西，如：如何有愛心、承擔(dān)責(zé)任、學(xué)會感恩、擇友等等。選擇一個話題，描述一段經(jīng)歷，并說說你的想法并發(fā)表自己的看法。注意詳細(xì)描述經(jīng)歷，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。時態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時。

【亮點說明】reliable companion ,come into, keep bad company，To my understanding.等詞組使文章更生動；A good friend can be our reliable companion while with a bad one we may easily get lost. While 連詞表示轉(zhuǎn)折；Once before a test, my friend Joy and I came into the classroom, where several classmates gathered aroud, writing something excitedly. Where引導(dǎo)的定語從句使文章更有水平。To my understanding, friends, like books,

if well chosen, will greatly benefit us. 將朋友比喻成書籍，十分生動形象。文章的安排分為三部分，開頭部分：引出話題。正文部分：描述事例。結(jié)尾部分：簡要總結(jié)，發(fā)表自己的觀點。