Question

【題目】假設(shè)英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

When the accident was happened, I was standing near a bus stop. There I saw an old lady waiting a bus with her umbrella. The bus soon arrived. There were too many passengers hurried to get on it that the old lady couldn’t get on. A driver closed the door without looking careful and drove away. Unluckily, the old lady’s umbrella was caught by the door. He shouted to the driver but he didn’t hear. The bus pulled her along the road. Finally, she fall to the ground. Several minutes late, the ambulance came and took her to hospital. I thought it was the driver should be responsible for the accident.

Answer 1

【答案】1. 去掉happened前面的was。

2. 在waiting后加for。

3. too改為so

4. hurried改為hurrying

5. A改為The

6. careful改為carefully

7. He改為She

8. fall改為fell

9. late改為later

10. 在driver后加that或who

【解析】事故發(fā)生，不能用被動(dòng)，happen 無(wú)被動(dòng)。

等車應(yīng)該為wait for a bus

There were too many passengers hurried to get on it that the old lady couldn’t get on.此句考查so…that句型，所以，too 不對(duì)。

There were too many passengers hurried to get on it此句中passengers 與hurry to get on it之間為主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以用doing。

A driver closed the door without looking careful and drove away.此句中的driver特指這輛車的司機(jī)，所以不能用a。

A driver closed the door without looking careful and drove away.此句中司機(jī)沒(méi)有仔細(xì)看，修飾look應(yīng)該用副詞carefully。

He shouted to the driver but he didn’t hear.此句表示哪位老婦人對(duì)司機(jī)喊叫，所以人稱錯(cuò)了。

Finally, she fall to the ground.此句時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)前后文此句應(yīng)該用過(guò)去式。

幾分鐘之后，應(yīng)該用Several minutes later,而不用late，late表示晚的，遲到的。

I thought it was the driver should be responsible for the accident.此句為強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，所以要加上that/who.