Question

20．假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)右邊四幅圖，用英文寫篇短文，記敘你參加學(xué)校演講比賽的過程，并簡(jiǎn)要發(fā)表你的感想．

注意：
1．考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫；
2．詞數(shù)120左右；
3．文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息．
參考詞匯：演講廳lecture hall
演講稿speech draft．
On Monday，I saw a poster which read that a speech contest with thetopic"honesty"would be held at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning．【高分句型】（Picture 1 看到有關(guān)演講比賽的通知）
With my parents'encouragement，I entered for the contest．At first I felt at a loss about my speech draft．After referring to some magazines，I got down to my draft．（Picture 2 著手演講比賽的草稿）Having tailored it for several times，I practiced my speechat home every day．【高分句型】My parents were more than pleased to see me so devoted．（Picture 3 調(diào)整修改草稿并在家練習(xí)）Then came the big day for my speech．【高分句型】A little bit nervous as Iwas，I managed to deliver my speech fluently．【高分句型】（Picture 4 成功自信地登臺(tái)演講）
I've learned a lot from thecontest．Confidence comes hand in hand with adequate preparations．Wellprepared，I can do everything successfully．【高分句型】（感謝）．

Answer 1

分析 本文是圖畫類作文，要求根據(jù)四幅圖的先后順序描述參加學(xué)校演講比賽的過程并發(fā)表感想．在寫作時(shí)，人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，抓住細(xì)節(jié)按順序安排好材料．重要短語：hold a speech contest （舉行演講比賽），enter for （報(bào)名參加），feel/be at a loss （茫然不知所措），refer to（參閱，查閱），get down to （著手開始做某事），tailor sth（調(diào)整，修改某物），more than pleased todo sth（做某事非常高興），manage to do sth（設(shè)法成功地做某事），deliver one's speech（發(fā)表演講）； learn sth from…（從…中學(xué)會(huì)…）；hand in hand（密切關(guān)聯(lián)地；同時(shí)并進(jìn)地）．
【高分句型】
1．I saw a poster which read that a speech contest with the topic"honesty"would be held at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning．
這里是which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，which在定語從句中作主語，先行詞是a poster，定語從句中的謂語動(dòng)詞為read，read之后是賓語從句．賓語從句中a speech contest with the topic"honesty"，謂語動(dòng)詞為would be held，at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning為地點(diǎn)狀語．
2．Having tailored it for several times，I practiced my speech at home every day．
這里是現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式+賓語作狀語，主句為I practiced my speech at home every day，主句的主語I與所給動(dòng)詞tailor存在邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系，且動(dòng)作存在先后關(guān)系，調(diào)整草稿動(dòng)作在練習(xí)動(dòng)作之前．
3．Then came the big day for my speech．
這里是全部倒裝，其結(jié)構(gòu)為"時(shí)間副詞+謂語動(dòng)詞+主語"．
4．A little bit nervous as I was，I managed to deliver my speech fluently．
這里是部分倒裝，其結(jié)構(gòu)為"形容詞+as/though+主語"．

解答 On Monday，I saw a poster which read that a speech contest with thetopic"honesty"would be held at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning．【高分句型】（Picture 1 看到有關(guān)演講比賽的通知）
With my parents'encouragement，I entered for the contest．At first I felt at a loss about my speech draft．After referring to some magazines，I got down to my draft．（Picture 2 著手演講比賽的草稿）Having tailored it for several times，I practiced my speechat home every day．【高分句型】My parents were more than pleased to see me so devoted．（Picture 3 調(diào)整修改草稿并在家練習(xí)）Then came the big day for my speech．【高分句型】A little bit nervous as Iwas，I managed to deliver my speech fluently．【高分句型】（Picture 4 成功自信地登臺(tái)演講）
I've learned a lot from thecontest．Confidence comes hand in hand with adequate preparations．Wellprepared，I can do everything successfully．【高分句型】（感謝）

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