分析 本文是圖畫(huà)類(lèi)作文,要求根據(jù)四幅圖的先后順序描述參加學(xué)校演講比賽的過(guò)程并發(fā)表感想.在寫(xiě)作時(shí),人稱(chēng)以第一和第三人稱(chēng)為主.時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主.根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展,抓住細(xì)節(jié)按順序安排好材料.重要短語(yǔ):hold a speech contest (舉行演講比賽),enter for (報(bào)名參加),feel/be at a loss (茫然不知所措),refer to(參閱,查閱),get down to (著手開(kāi)始做某事),tailor sth(調(diào)整,修改某物),more than pleased todo sth(做某事非常高興),manage to do sth(設(shè)法成功地做某事),deliver one's speech(發(fā)表演講); learn sth from…(從…中學(xué)會(huì)…);hand in hand(密切關(guān)聯(lián)地;同時(shí)并進(jìn)地).
【高分句型】
1.I saw a poster which read that a speech contest with the topic"honesty"would be held at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning.
這里是which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句,which在定語(yǔ)從句中作主語(yǔ),先行詞是a poster,定語(yǔ)從句中的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為read,read之后是賓語(yǔ)從句.賓語(yǔ)從句中a speech contest with the topic"honesty",謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為would be held,at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning為地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ).
2.Having tailored it for several times,I practiced my speech at home every day.
這里是現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式+賓語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ),主句為I practiced my speech at home every day,主句的主語(yǔ)I與所給動(dòng)詞tailor存在邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系,且動(dòng)作存在先后關(guān)系,調(diào)整草稿動(dòng)作在練習(xí)動(dòng)作之前.
3.Then came the big day for my speech.
這里是全部倒裝,其結(jié)構(gòu)為"時(shí)間副詞+謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞+主語(yǔ)".
4.A little bit nervous as I was,I managed to deliver my speech fluently.
這里是部分倒裝,其結(jié)構(gòu)為"形容詞+as/though+主語(yǔ)".
解答 On Monday,I saw a poster which read that a speech contest with thetopic"honesty"would be held at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning.【高分句型】(Picture 1 看到有關(guān)演講比賽的通知)
With my parents'encouragement,I entered for the contest.At first I felt at a loss about my speech draft.After referring to some magazines,I got down to my draft.(Picture 2 著手演講比賽的草稿)Having tailored it for several times,I practiced my speechat home every day.【高分句型】My parents were more than pleased to see me so devoted.(Picture 3 調(diào)整修改草稿并在家練習(xí))Then came the big day for my speech.【高分句型】A little bit nervous as Iwas,I managed to deliver my speech fluently.【高分句型】(Picture 4 成功自信地登臺(tái)演講)
I've learned a lot from thecontest.Confidence comes hand in hand with adequate preparations.Wellprepared,I can do everything successfully.【高分句型】(感謝)
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