Question

20．假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)右邊四幅圖，用英文寫(xiě)篇短文，記敘你參加學(xué)校演講比賽的過(guò)程，并簡(jiǎn)要發(fā)表你的感想．

注意：
1．考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫；
2．詞數(shù)120左右；
3．文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息．
參考詞匯：演講廳lecture hall
演講稿speech draft．
On Monday，I saw a poster which read that a speech contest with thetopic"honesty"would be held at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning．【高分句型】（Picture 1 看到有關(guān)演講比賽的通知）
With my parents'encouragement，I entered for the contest．At first I felt at a loss about my speech draft．After referring to some magazines，I got down to my draft．（Picture 2 著手演講比賽的草稿）Having tailored it for several times，I practiced my speechat home every day．【高分句型】My parents were more than pleased to see me so devoted．（Picture 3 調(diào)整修改草稿并在家練習(xí)）Then came the big day for my speech．【高分句型】A little bit nervous as Iwas，I managed to deliver my speech fluently．【高分句型】（Picture 4 成功自信地登臺(tái)演講）
I've learned a lot from thecontest．Confidence comes hand in hand with adequate preparations．Wellprepared，I can do everything successfully．【高分句型】（感謝）．

Answer 1

分析 本文是圖畫(huà)類(lèi)作文，要求根據(jù)四幅圖的先后順序描述參加學(xué)校演講比賽的過(guò)程并發(fā)表感想．在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，人稱(chēng)以第一和第三人稱(chēng)為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，抓住細(xì)節(jié)按順序安排好材料．重要短語(yǔ)：hold a speech contest （舉行演講比賽），enter for （報(bào)名參加），feel/be at a loss （茫然不知所措），refer to（參閱，查閱），get down to （著手開(kāi)始做某事），tailor sth（調(diào)整，修改某物），more than pleased todo sth（做某事非常高興），manage to do sth（設(shè)法成功地做某事），deliver one's speech（發(fā)表演講）； learn sth from…（從…中學(xué)會(huì)…）；hand in hand（密切關(guān)聯(lián)地；同時(shí)并進(jìn)地）．
【高分句型】
1．I saw a poster which read that a speech contest with the topic"honesty"would be held at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning．
這里是which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，which在定語(yǔ)從句中作主語(yǔ)，先行詞是a poster，定語(yǔ)從句中的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為read，read之后是賓語(yǔ)從句．賓語(yǔ)從句中a speech contest with the topic"honesty"，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為would be held，at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning為地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)．
2．Having tailored it for several times，I practiced my speech at home every day．
這里是現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式+賓語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)，主句為I practiced my speech at home every day，主句的主語(yǔ)I與所給動(dòng)詞tailor存在邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系，且動(dòng)作存在先后關(guān)系，調(diào)整草稿動(dòng)作在練習(xí)動(dòng)作之前．
3．Then came the big day for my speech．
這里是全部倒裝，其結(jié)構(gòu)為"時(shí)間副詞+謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞+主語(yǔ)"．
4．A little bit nervous as I was，I managed to deliver my speech fluently．
這里是部分倒裝，其結(jié)構(gòu)為"形容詞+as/though+主語(yǔ)"．

解答 On Monday，I saw a poster which read that a speech contest with thetopic"honesty"would be held at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning．【高分句型】（Picture 1 看到有關(guān)演講比賽的通知）
With my parents'encouragement，I entered for the contest．At first I felt at a loss about my speech draft．After referring to some magazines，I got down to my draft．（Picture 2 著手演講比賽的草稿）Having tailored it for several times，I practiced my speechat home every day．【高分句型】My parents were more than pleased to see me so devoted．（Picture 3 調(diào)整修改草稿并在家練習(xí)）Then came the big day for my speech．【高分句型】A little bit nervous as Iwas，I managed to deliver my speech fluently．【高分句型】（Picture 4 成功自信地登臺(tái)演講）
I've learned a lot from thecontest．Confidence comes hand in hand with adequate preparations．Wellprepared，I can do everything successfully．【高分句型】（感謝）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)作看圖作文時(shí)，首先認(rèn)真看圖，結(jié)合圖片和文字，確定所要表達(dá)的主題是什么，然后圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，合理想象，對(duì)譯出的要點(diǎn)通過(guò)合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞使表達(dá)連貫．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．