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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1）. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2）. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
When I look at this picture of myself， I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time,car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kings of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.

Answer 1

【答案】When I look at this picture of myself. I realize how time flies. I grown not only physically, also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was , I entered my second year of high school and a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things were very important in my life at that time,car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying kings of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of high school days.
【解析】
⑴句意：當我看我這張照片是，我意識到時間過得是多么快。realize是及物動詞，后直接跟賓語或從句，故去掉of。
⑵句意：在過去幾年里我不僅身體上已經(jīng)成長，而且精神上也得以成長。in the past few years是現(xiàn)在完成時的標志，故將had改為have。
⑶短語：not only……but also，故將and改為but。
⑷句意：在拍這張照片的第二年，我進入高中的第二年，成為學校音樂俱樂部的一名新成員。be+過去分詞 構(gòu)成被動語態(tài)，而took是過去式，故將took改為taken。
⑸and前后構(gòu)成并列關(guān)系，既become與entered是并列的，故用一般過去式，因此把become改為became。
⑹句意：照片中在我周圍的是那時候在我的生活中很重要的東西：汽車雜志和樂器。picture是可數(shù)名詞，在前文中已經(jīng)出現(xiàn)過，故加the表示特指。
⑺此處是定語從句，缺少關(guān)系代詞，先行詞是things，故將they改為that或which。
⑻句意：我喜歡研究不同的汽車、飛機，演奏流行音樂，收集最新的音樂唱片。修飾名詞應該用形容詞，故將difference改為different。
⑼late不可作定語，故將late改為latest，最新的。
⑽句意：這張照片經(jīng)常給我?guī)�來對高中生活的回憶。根�?jù)句意可知此處描寫我的生活，故將your改為my。