Question

【題目】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記錄你和同學參加“助力冬奧，暢享冰雪”為主題的快樂滑雪活動的全過程。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于60;

2. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞：滑雪場 ski resort

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Answer 1

【答案】With the approach of Winter Olympics, more and more people begin to try winter sports. Last weekend, my classmates and I decided to enjoy the snowy fun. Absolutely delighted, we enrolled in a training class. Arriving at the ski resort, our trainer gave us specific instruction in safe and skillful skiing. He was so careful and helpful that it didn’t take long to get ourselves on the trail. At first, we were all scared to take the first step in our skis. When we saw others having so much fun, we set out. Although we had several falls, none of us gave up. With great efforts, we were able to keep balance and ski more confidently. We played happily and felt a sense of achievement.

To record the exciting moment, we took many pictures. We hope, in 2022, we can work as volunteers in Winter Olympics.

【解析】

本文是看圖作文。

本篇書面表達屬看圖作文。第1步：假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記錄你和同學參加“助力冬奧，暢享冰雪”為主題的快樂滑雪活動的全過程。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：With the approach of Winter Olympics（隨著冬奧會的靠近）；enjoy the snowy fun（享受雪的樂趣）；specific instruction（具體的指示）；felt a sense of achievement.（感到一種成就感）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。