7．下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．
注意：
1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
As a senior three student，it won't take long after I graduate．Now，I have much to share with my fellow student．
Firstly，I'd like to show my appreciation to those stand by me all the way，teachers，parents and friends included．Without their help and advice，my life will be different．Secondly，it's high time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstand．I firm believe that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship．Thirdly，I've made up my mind to make every effort to study，so hard work is the key to a success．Finally I want to express my hope which all the younger fellows can make full use of time，because time and tide wait for no man．

分析 作為一名高三的學(xué)生，我不久就要畢業(yè)了．想和同學(xué)們分享一下我的感受．首先我要感謝那些一直支持我的同學(xué)，老師，父母和朋友．我還要向那些我傷害或誤解過(guò)的同學(xué)道歉．最后我要努力學(xué)習(xí)，希望我的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們也要充分利用時(shí)間，歲月不待人�。�

解答 As a senior three student，it won't take long after I graduate．Now，I have much to share with my fellow student．
                                                                   before                                                                                students
Firstly，I'd like to show my appreciation to those∧stand by me all the way，teachers，parents 
                                                                     加who或改stand為standing
and friends included．Without their help and advice，my life will be different．Secondly，it's high  
                                                                                         would                            
time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstand．I firm believe that 
           me                                                                   misunderstood   firmly
communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship．Thirdly，I've made up my mind to make 
                                                        
every effort to study，so hard work is the key to a success．Finally I want to express my hope which
                           as/for/because                         去掉                                                              that
all the younger fellows can make full use of time，because time and tide wait for no man．
1．a(chǎn)fter改為before．句意表達(dá)的不久就畢業(yè)了，句型是：it will+時(shí)間段+before多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間后就…
2．student改為students．句意表達(dá)的是我的同學(xué)們，要用復(fù)數(shù)．
3．加who或改stand為standing．題干中I'd like to show my appreciation to those是一個(gè)完整的句子，后面要么用定語(yǔ)從句，要么用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．
4．will改為would．題干中Without their help and advice表達(dá)的是虛擬條件，主句中要用would加動(dòng)詞原形．
5．I改為me． 題干中I是用來(lái)作介詞for的賓語(yǔ)，要用賓格．
6．misunderstand改為misundersstood．句意講述的是我過(guò)去誤會(huì)過(guò)的同學(xué)，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
7．firm改為firmly．修飾動(dòng)詞要用副詞．
8．so改為as/for/because．句意表達(dá)的原因，so后接的是結(jié)果．
9．a(chǎn)去掉．題干中success表達(dá)的是抽象概念，不用冠詞．
10．which改為that．題干中all the younger fellows can make full use of time是解釋hope的內(nèi)容，是同位語(yǔ)從句，要用that來(lái)引導(dǎo)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹R(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．

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