Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤僅限1詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Li Lin is a senior three students who devotes himself to his lessons every day．Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several courses．In the evening, he studies at home until deep into the night．He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn't work effectively．In Sunday morning, Li Lin was about to study when his father came up and advised him to have a break．Soon they had good idea．They bought a kite which they liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs where Li Lin enjoyed himself fly the kite．The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air．On Monday, Li Lin was energetic and actively in class．He said it was only why he had a better weekend.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】students改為student

【2】studies改為studied

【3】too改為so

【4】In改為On

【5】good idea前加a

【6】liked it中的it去掉

【7】fly改為flying

【8】but改為and

【9】actively改為active

【10】why改為because

【解析】

試題分析：李林是一名高三學(xué)生，他課上精力充沛，積極活躍，這完全得益于他有一個(gè)更好的周末。

【1】students改為student 句意： 一名高三學(xué)生，所以是單數(shù)。故把students改為student。

【2】studies改為studied 句意：說的是上周的事，所以是過去時(shí)態(tài)。故把studies改為studied。

【3】too改為so 固定句式so…that…如此…以至于…．；too不能用于這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)。故把too改為so。

【4】In改為On 具體到某一天的早晨使用介詞on。故把In改為On。

【5】good idea前加a idea為可數(shù)名詞，故在good idea前加a。

【6】liked it中的it去掉 定語從句的關(guān)系代詞which已經(jīng)做了liked的賓語，所以it多余。故把liked it中的it去掉。

【7】fly改為flying 固定結(jié)構(gòu)：enjoy (oneself) doing sth.故把 fly改為flying。

【8】but改為and 根據(jù)句意，不表轉(zhuǎn)折，而是順承。 故把but改為and。

【9】actively改為active 跟energetic并列做表語，用形容詞，故把a(bǔ)ctively改為active。

【10】why改為because 根據(jù)語境含義，“這是因?yàn)椤�…�?/span>，故把why改為because。

【知識拓展】

1.This is why 主語+謂語---，這就是為什么---。

2.That is because主語+謂語---，那是因?yàn)?--。

3.The reason is that主語+謂語---，理由是----。