Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你剛收到了你的朋友王梅的電子郵件，她在郵件里向你詢問在高中如何學(xué)好英語。請你根據(jù)下列的內(nèi)容給她寫封回信。
1 上課認(rèn)真聽講，做好筆記，課后及時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)
2 詞匯是基礎(chǔ)，每天早上花半個(gè)小時(shí)的時(shí)間背誦單詞，朗讀課文
3 課外多與同學(xué)用英語交流，提高聽力和口語能力

注意：詞數(shù)120-150,短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總數(shù)
內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫

Dear Wang Mei,
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Best wishes

yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Mei,

I am very glad to have receive your E-mail. Now I am writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school

First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class. As is known to all , vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud. What’s more, try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class . In this way you can improve your listening and spoken English . Last but not least, you should develop the Habit of keeping a diary, which helps your written English and helps you go over the words and expressions that you have learnt.

I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way .
Best wishes

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】本篇書面表達(dá)要求給朋友回信，介紹在高中如何學(xué)好英語的問題。書信是同學(xué)們熟悉的寫作體裁，而且信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，所以寫作時(shí)不需要注意書信的格式，這使得文章的寫作更加容易。在寫作前要確定文章的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，根據(jù)本文要求可以判斷應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第一人稱。寫作要點(diǎn)也已經(jīng)給出，主要包括三個(gè)方面，即1. 上課認(rèn)真聽講，做好筆記，課后及時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)；2. 詞匯是基礎(chǔ)，每天早上花半個(gè)小時(shí)的時(shí)間背誦單詞，朗讀課文；3. 課外多與同學(xué)用英語交流，提高聽力和口語能力。在寫作時(shí)需用適當(dāng)表示順序的詞來進(jìn)行上下文的銜接，以增加文章的可讀性和層次性。此外，還要盡量使用高級詞匯和多種句式來提高文章檔次。

范文亮點(diǎn)說明：范文使用了一些常用的短語和句型：give sb. advice給某人建議、take notes記筆記、of great importance重要的、spend…reciting…花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事；communicate with與……交流、out of class在課外、develop the habit of養(yǎng)成……的習(xí)慣；…h(huán)ow to learn English well in high school 是賓語從句；…so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class是目的狀語從句和時(shí)間狀語從句；As is known to all…是非限制性定語從句；which helps your written English and helps you go over the words and expressions that you have learnt是定語從句；where there is a will, there is a way 是諺語提高文章文采；用First of all、What’s more、Last but not least使文章條理清晰，更加連貫。