【題目】短文政錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10 處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處 。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加 、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（ 〈），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意 ：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2. 只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計分。

I was walking to school this morning when I caught a sight of an old woman with a walking stick lain on the ground. I ran over quick to help her up and asked her what was wrong with her. She told me she slips and fell due to heart trouble.

I was worrying and decided to take her to a hospital. And then I went to a department store near the hospitals and contacted her family. Soon her son and daughter came the hospital. He thanked and praised me for my kindness by writing me a thank-you letter. Although I was later for school today, I felt very proud of that I had done.

【答案】

【1】刪除a

【2】lain改為lying

【3】quick改為quickly

【4】slips改為slipped

【5】worrying改為worried

【6】hospitals改為hospital

【7】came后面加to

【8】He改為They

【9】later改為late

【10】that改為what

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，今天上午上學路上，我把摔倒的老人送到醫(yī)院并聯(lián)系對方的家人。

【1】刪除a 考查固定搭配。短語catch sight of看見；原文中a是多余的。句意：今天早晨我正步行上學校，在這時我看見一個手里拿著拐棍的老人躺在地上。

【2】lain改為lying 考查非謂語動詞。本句中an old woman與動詞lie之間構(gòu)成主動關系，所以使用現(xiàn)在分詞短語lying在句中作賓語補足語。

【3】quick改為quickly 考查副詞。在英語中通常使用副詞做狀語修飾形容詞、副詞或者動詞。所以本句中使用副詞quickly修飾動詞短語run over。

【4】slips改為slipped 考查時態(tài)。本文敘述了今天上午我上學時在路上遇見的事情，全文使用一般過去時。所以本句使用過去式slipped

【5】worrying改為worried 考查形容詞。過去分詞轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞worried感到擔憂的，通常修飾人或與人有關的事物。句意：我很擔憂并決定送她去醫(yī)院。

【6】hospitals改為hospital 考查名詞單復數(shù)。根據(jù)前句中take her to a hospital，可知hospital應該使用單數(shù)形式。

【7】came后面加to 考查動詞。動詞come 是一個不及物動詞，后面不能直接加賓語，要接介詞to，然后再接賓語。短語come to...來到。

【8】He改為They 考查代詞。根據(jù)前句Soon her son and daughter came ....可知老人的兒子和女兒都來了，所以使用they指代他們。

【9】later改為late 考查形容詞短語。形容詞be late for遲到...；句意：今天盡管我上學遲到，但是我為自己所做的事情感到很自豪。

【10】that改為what 考查賓語從句。本句中what引導賓語從句what I hade done作為介詞of的賓語，同時what在句中作動詞done的賓語。

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