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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1）每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Ladies and gentlemen,
It's my honor to give a speech here. After-class activities play a important part in our school life. Proper activities help enrich our lives, broaden our horizons or develop our personalities.
Mine own experience can serve as a case in point. When I was in Senior One, I become a member of our drama club, that I used to visit on weekends. Since my participation in various activities organizing by the club, I achieved a lot.
These activities bring me a lot of funs, provide me with good opportunities to develop new friendships and open a window through which I have a brand-new outlook. With so much advantages shown above, why not to join us at once?

Answer 1

【答案】; Ladies and gentlemen,
It's my honor to give a speech here. After-class activities play important part in our school life. Proper activities help enrich our lives, broaden our horizons develop our personalities.
own experience can serve as a case in point. When I was in Senior One, I a member of our drama club, I used to visit on weekends. Since my participation in various activities by the club, I achieved a lot.
These activities bring me a lot of , provide me with good opportunities to develop new friendships and open a window through which I have a brand-new outlook. With so advantages shown above, why not join us at once?
【解析】本文是一篇議論文，論述了課外活動的作用。
①考查冠詞。 important的發(fā)音開頭是元音，故要用不定冠詞an。因此a改為an 。
②考查連詞。 句意：適當(dāng)?shù)幕顒佑兄�于豐富我們的生活，拓寬我們的視野，并且可以培養(yǎng)我們的性格。enrich our lives，broaden our horizons和develop our personalities是并列關(guān)系，故要將or改為and。
③考查代詞。 mine是名詞性物主代詞，相當(dāng)于＂my+名詞＂。該處后面有名詞experience，故要將Mine改為My。
④考查時態(tài)。 該句的時間狀語為＂When I was in Senior One＂，是過去的時間，故主句要用一般過去時態(tài)，故應(yīng)將become改為became。
⑤考查定語從句。 分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，＂which I used to visit on weekends＂是非限制性定語從句，修飾our drama club，引導(dǎo)詞在從句中作visit的賓語，故要用關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)從句。that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，因此that改為which。
⑥考查非謂語動詞。＂organized by the club＂是定語從句，修飾various activities，various activities和organize之間是被動關(guān)系，故要用過去分詞作定語。因此organizing改為organized。
⑦考查時態(tài)。 該句的時間狀語為＂Since my participation in various activities＂，since引出時間狀語，主句用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)，故要在I后加have。
⑧考查名詞。 fun是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式，故要將funs改為fun。
⑨考查形容詞。 much修飾不可數(shù)名詞，many修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。advantages是復(fù)數(shù)名詞，故要將much改為many。
⑩考查固定句式。 why not do sth.意為＂為什么不做……呢？＂，是固定句式，故to多余，應(yīng)去掉。