Question

書面表達（滿分15分）
假設你應邀參見學校組織的“英語學習師生座談會”， 請你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息， 用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，簡單介紹自己學習英語的情況，并對學校今后的英語教學提出建議。

自己英語學習的情況	1. 英語學習的目的
	2. 英語學習的方法
	3. 課外自學的途徑
	……
對學校英語教學的建議	（請考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷與感想，提出兩至三點建議。）

注意：1.對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。
2.詞數(shù)150左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
3.文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。
Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of l earning English with you.                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

不唯一
Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.  1) I’m interested in English, and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well. 2)As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. 3) After class, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, I’ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.
Now, I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. 4) Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. 5) Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more English contests and festivals.
Thank you for listening.

解析試題分析：考生如果想拿到高分，必須按照要求在作文中覆蓋試題規(guī)定的所有內(nèi)容要點，完成試題任務，達到預期的寫作目的。在寫作時，考生應該留心是否要點完整，是否有要點遺漏。在題示要點完整的前提下，考生可以以作文材料為中心進行適當?shù)匕l(fā)揮，適當補充一部分，以期使作文更加完美。千萬不要打破常規(guī)，追求所謂的標新立異，因為這樣做，往往會適得其反，不但不能出色地完成書面表達的任務，而且最終拿不到自己心目中理想的作文分數(shù)。這里應該注意動詞的時態(tài)及人稱的變化。
考點：提綱作文。
點評：在寫作時，考生應該盡可能地減少錯誤，避免出現(xiàn)漢字、拼音、空格等低級錯誤，盡量避開自己使用起來沒有把握的單詞和句子。如果為了追求句式的變化而出現(xiàn)了一些本來可以避免的錯誤，就得不償失了。在保證準確的前提下，考生才可以考慮句式的變化，應用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)。