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【題目】假設(shè)你是中華中學(xué)學(xué)生姚平，最近參加了一項(xiàng)研究性學(xué)習(xí)調(diào)研，課題為＂父母是否以子女為榮＂。通過(guò)調(diào)研你校學(xué)生及其父母，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)雙方對(duì)此問(wèn)題的看法有差異（數(shù)據(jù)如圖所示）。根據(jù)圖表寫(xiě)一份報(bào)告，在報(bào)告中，你必須：
①描述調(diào)研數(shù)據(jù)；
② 分析可能導(dǎo)致這一結(jié)果的原因。

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【答案】參考例文：
Recently，we made a survey about whether the parents agree that they are proud of their children．The result shows that 80% of parents are proud of their children while only 60% of children hold the same opinion．According to the survey，we can conclude that the number of parents who approved the idea is 20% more than of children．
There seems to be two causes as we tried to figure out what led to this subtle difference． First，conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their children．This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self-confidence． Second，the current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance，thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud． This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports，which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves．
Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam-oriented educational methods，a kid would never end up with a positive grown-up．
【解析】本文屬于圖表作文。要求考生以姚平的身份寫(xiě)一則報(bào)告，通報(bào)“父母是否以子女為榮”的調(diào)研報(bào)告的內(nèi)容。文章使用第三人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主的時(shí)態(tài)。要點(diǎn)：1.最近參加了一項(xiàng)研究性學(xué)習(xí)調(diào)研，課題為“父母是否以子女為榮”。通過(guò)調(diào)研你校學(xué)生及其父母，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)雙方對(duì)此問(wèn)題的看法有差異。2.百分之80的父母親以孩子為榮；百分之60的孩子認(rèn)為父母以我為榮。3.分析原因：父母親把全部的精力都放在孩子身上，孩子的成功也證明自己的教育方法是正確的；而現(xiàn)在的孩子因?yàn)槟挲g較小，并沒(méi)有很強(qiáng)的責(zé)任感,他們并沒(méi)有感受到自己承擔(dān)的義務(wù)和責(zé)任。建議在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候添加適當(dāng)?shù)闹V語(yǔ)，如Everycoin has two sides.提升文采，以增加獲得高分的可能性；穿插使用多種句式，讓文章富有變化.同時(shí)要使用兩到三個(gè)復(fù)合句，并適當(dāng)使用串聯(lián)詞。