【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Dear Tom,

I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you the adulthood ceremony holding in our school yesterday.

At 8:00 am all students and teachers from Senior 3 who gathered on the playground of our school, where a grand ceremony took place. The principal first delivered a speech congratulating us on our adulthood, but then one of the students spoke briefly in behalf of us. Finally, we students took an oath that we should behaves as adults and take many responsibilities in the future. However, some parents were invited to attend the ceremony.

I believe the events will encourage ourselves to work hard to make our dream come true.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

【1】第一處：holding→held

【2】第二處：在all和students中間加the

【3】第三處：去掉Senior 3后面的who

【4】第四處：but→and

【5】第五處：in→on

【6】第六處：behaves→behave

【7】第七處：many→more

【8】第八處：However→Moreover

【9】第九處：events→event

【10】第十處：ourselves→us

【解析】

【1】第一處：holding→held 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的用法。這里是說(shuō)昨天舉行了成人儀式，動(dòng)詞在這里作后置定語(yǔ)，故將holding改為held。

【2】第二處：在all和students中間加the 考查定冠詞的用法。因?yàn)槭翘刂副拘５膶W(xué)生和教師，所以在all和students中間要加上定冠詞the。

【3】第三處：去掉Senior 3后面的who 考查代詞的用法。本句是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，不需要關(guān)系代詞。如果加了who的話，就不是一個(gè)完整的句子了，故將who去掉。

【4】第四處：but→and 考查連詞的用法。前面說(shuō)校長(zhǎng)祝賀我們成人，后面是學(xué)生代表發(fā)言，應(yīng)該是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，故將but改為and。

【5】第五處：in→on 考查介詞的用法。on behalf of是固定短語(yǔ)，意思是“代表……”，故將in改為on。

【6】第六處：behaves→behave 考查動(dòng)詞的用法。動(dòng)詞前面有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should，所以后面要用動(dòng)詞原形。故將behaves改為behave。

【7】第七處：many→more 考查比較級(jí)的用法。因?yàn)檫@里表示將來(lái)要承擔(dān)更多的責(zé)任，所以應(yīng)該用比較級(jí)。故將many改為more。

【8】第八處：However→Moreover 考查副詞的用法。此處是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將However改為Moreover。

【9】第九處：events→event 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)的用法。這里是指這次的成人儀式，所以要用單數(shù)形式，故將events改為event。

【10】第十處：ourselves→us 考查代詞的用法。成人儀式只能是鼓勵(lì)“我們”，而不是“我們自己”。所以將ourselves改為us。

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