Question

【題目】假如你是李華，已經(jīng)被大學(xué)錄取，即將進(jìn)入大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。請你用英語給好友Sam寫一封信，談?wù)勥M(jìn)入大學(xué)后的打算。短文應(yīng)包含以下要點：

1、盡快適應(yīng)環(huán)境;

2、注重能力發(fā)展。

注意：

1. 全文100詞左右；

2. 書信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sam,

How are you getting along with your life recently? _______________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sam,

How are you getting along with your life recently? Today I’m writing to talk about my plan for college life in the near future.

College life is both a joy and a challenge to me. Therefore, adjusting myself quickly to the new circumstance is the first thing I will deal with. For example, I’ll try to get used to the college schedule as soon as possible and I’ll make some friends so that I can feel at ease in college.

Next, various abilities should be developed. Besides being independent in study and life, I will enter for meaningful activities to get more social practice and develop my strong points.

Can you give me some advice? As a sophomore, you must have a lot to tell me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是李華，已經(jīng)被大學(xué)錄取，即將進(jìn)入大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。請你用英語給好友Sam寫一封信，談?wù)勥M(jìn)入大學(xué)后的打算。短文應(yīng)包含以下要點：1、盡快適應(yīng)環(huán)境;2、注重能力發(fā)展。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1. 全文100詞左右；2. 書信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇書信，格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，布局合理，運用高級句子。adjusting myself quickly to the new circumstance is the first thing I will deal with.句中使用省略that的定語從句；I’ll try to get used to the college schedule as soon as possible and I’ll make some friends so that I can feel at ease in college.并列句和目的狀語從句完美結(jié)合；various abilities should be developed.含情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)；Besides being independent in study and life,介詞后面跟動名詞形式；另外，Therefore, For example, as soon as possible，Next,的運用為文章增色添彩。